The ultimate G-Spot
where's truly the Greatest G spot?22 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have surprised me with this write and you are a sweet soul as your tribute to Gratitiude is very commendable and kind, God's embrace and G-spot! How lovely, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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You have surprised me with this write and you are a sweet soul as your tribute to Gratitiude is very commendable and kind, God's embrace and G-spot! How lovely, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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Thanks Dolly, always wonderful to hear from you and have a fabulous new year! Blessings always! Vance
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Cute poem and very cute puppy. Bitsy appears to be a very apt name.
Well written, well rhymed, well done.
Thank you for sharing your poem and your picture of the little sweetie.
Sharon
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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Cute poem and very cute puppy. Bitsy appears to be a very apt name.
Well written, well rhymed, well done.
Thank you for sharing your poem and your picture of the little sweetie.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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Thank you Sharon for you very kind and generous review! Have a fabulous new year! Vance...AKA..HIS GRAYNESS
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. There are very little things that can satisfy the human soul when it can find the place wherever there is peace that cannot be described by the human race.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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A very well-written poem. There are very little things that can satisfy the human soul when it can find the place wherever there is peace that cannot be described by the human race.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much Sandra, as always, it's a joy to hear from you! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Well said, G-spot is a place that our mind goes where love, God, Grace, Generosity and Gratitude repose; this is a nice poem, a good message,Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Well said, G-spot is a place that our mind goes where love, God, Grace, Generosity and Gratitude repose; this is a nice poem, a good message,Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much Alcreator for another uplifting review and stars! I'm cleaning up my portfolio to launch a new book so all comments are really appreciated. Kindest regards always! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from robyn corum
HG,
This poem was well-crafted, but I have to tell you that I did not approve of the contents. I'm sure you will have many people tell you that it's brilliant and so on, but using a sexual term to explain God's love and touch is tacky to the extreme, in my opinion. I don't think it's something Jesus would approve of, do you?
I do not mean to offend, just to help you consider this in a different light. I will not lower the rating because of my opinion, because the writing WAS quality.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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HG,
This poem was well-crafted, but I have to tell you that I did not approve of the contents. I'm sure you will have many people tell you that it's brilliant and so on, but using a sexual term to explain God's love and touch is tacky to the extreme, in my opinion. I don't think it's something Jesus would approve of, do you?
I do not mean to offend, just to help you consider this in a different light. I will not lower the rating because of my opinion, because the writing WAS quality.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Sorry to offend you robyn, but I did not intend to integrate any sex innuendo into my work as G-spot is used in many genres' but I do understand why you might suggest to eliminate it in all ways. I'm sure Jesus knows my intention and will thank you for sending your thoughts to not run the risk of any mis-interpretations. thanks from me too! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Sis Cat
His Grayness, one of the things that amaze me about God is my dog. Sometimes I gaze upon her and tickle her and reflect upon my gratitude to God that I have such a gift of companionship. Your closing lines about your dog speaks how your loneliness was solved:
Where loneliness and sadness clouded my own G-spot in despair
I've now found its joy and constant Gratitude in the love that we share
Although this dog stanza is unexpected in your poem of faith, it feels right and true.
Going beyond the sexual definition, you write earlier in your poem about "the ultimate G-SPOT is in God's embrace." I love these well-expressed lines:
The utopia of joy can only really be expressed
When one truly realizes what it means to be blessed
Your poem is well rhymed and imagined. The only error is not in the poem itself, but in your author's notes where you omitted the apostrophe in "God's love."
Thank you for sharing your talent. Have a blessed weekend.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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His Grayness, one of the things that amaze me about God is my dog. Sometimes I gaze upon her and tickle her and reflect upon my gratitude to God that I have such a gift of companionship. Your closing lines about your dog speaks how your loneliness was solved:
Where loneliness and sadness clouded my own G-spot in despair
I've now found its joy and constant Gratitude in the love that we share
Although this dog stanza is unexpected in your poem of faith, it feels right and true.
Going beyond the sexual definition, you write earlier in your poem about "the ultimate G-SPOT is in God's embrace." I love these well-expressed lines:
The utopia of joy can only really be expressed
When one truly realizes what it means to be blessed
Your poem is well rhymed and imagined. The only error is not in the poem itself, but in your author's notes where you omitted the apostrophe in "God's love."
Thank you for sharing your talent. Have a blessed weekend.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Thanks again and again, Sis Cat...(I used to call my sister that) as she was always in love with cats, and when I finally grew up enough to dance...she called me cool cat too. I really appreciate your comments and always a delight to hear from you in all ways. Blessings always: Vance
Comment from val fitchie
GREAT "FLOW" of words AND thought......there actually appeared the sensation of gentle waves I Tactilely "felt" from the beginning of sentences to their end as well as paragraphs! this is the first time I reported THIS concerning one of your writings.......maybe there's a palpable refreshness HERE because of the SINCERITY of your transmission (the ebb and flow of your life being literally LITERALLY brought to our attention -the gentleness here has a REAL IMPACT
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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GREAT "FLOW" of words AND thought......there actually appeared the sensation of gentle waves I Tactilely "felt" from the beginning of sentences to their end as well as paragraphs! this is the first time I reported THIS concerning one of your writings.......maybe there's a palpable refreshness HERE because of the SINCERITY of your transmission (the ebb and flow of your life being literally LITERALLY brought to our attention -the gentleness here has a REAL IMPACT
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thanks Val, and yes, this was really a sincere epexegesis about the powerful love that can be offered by such a tiny and simple creature. My gratitude is constant! Vance
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, oh, oh!!! I've fallen in love - if that sweet little "Bitsy" isn't just the most adorable little puppy...!!! Your witty poem is so wonderfully uplifting - truly the best definition of the term (G-spot) I've ever read or heard. :))
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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Oh, oh, oh!!! I've fallen in love - if that sweet little "Bitsy" isn't just the most adorable little puppy...!!! Your witty poem is so wonderfully uplifting - truly the best definition of the term (G-spot) I've ever read or heard. :))
Comment Written 06-May-2016
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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HI Dawn: thanks so much for your TRULY UPLIFTING and generous review! Bitsy is my 4lb 200megaton LOVE BOMB that keeps GRATTITUDE PERMANTELY IN MY HEART AND MIND! I'm a dog lover from childhood and had many dogs of all breeds, ages, and personalities, but NEVER, any as SMART, LOVING, and PRECIOUS! as this little Angel! I'm so glad you appreciated my translation of these feelings into the "Ultimate G-Spot" as I thought that title would attract a lot of curiosity and exposure to her and my message. Love and Hugs! Vance PS: I will send you some more pics if you wish and shoot me your email. I'm at:
vls@market-karma.com
Comment from GE Parson
Goold morning my Brother,
Great poem! Unique take off of the G-spot.
I especially liked this section with all the G words:
"To be touched in a spot where the power of GRATITUDE
Reflects all the brilliant and kind gifts of one's attitude
The ultimate G-Spot is a place that your mind goes
Where: Love, God, Grace, Generosity, and Gratitude repose
Where dark anger and Grief are outshined in the light
Generated from a source of much Greater might
MARANATHA
"J"
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Goold morning my Brother,
Great poem! Unique take off of the G-spot.
I especially liked this section with all the G words:
"To be touched in a spot where the power of GRATITUDE
Reflects all the brilliant and kind gifts of one's attitude
The ultimate G-Spot is a place that your mind goes
Where: Love, God, Grace, Generosity, and Gratitude repose
Where dark anger and Grief are outshined in the light
Generated from a source of much Greater might
MARANATHA
"J"
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Thank you so much dear friend, for this lovely review. II had to push myself to use that title but wanted to get as much attention , to the poem's message as possible. I'm focused on promoting FAITH, LOVE, AND GRATITUDE till death do us part. Blessings! Vance
Comment from William Ross
very good the G=spot would be something that brings great pleasure, great write and good thought in this. have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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very good the G=spot would be something that brings great pleasure, great write and good thought in this. have a wonderful day
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Thank you William, for your fine review and encouragement! You did indeed make my day! My wish for a great one back to you with hopes we will share more with each other soon. His Grayness: Vance
