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A new phase of life

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Comment from Sankey
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This was great. I did think you might have been talking about a caterpillar, shredding it's 'house' to become a beautiful butterfly. And caterpillars DO sting if you touch them in the right place..

 Comment Written 01-May-2016


reply by the author on 01-May-2016
    Menopausal women sting too if you touch them in the wrong place. Lol. Thanks for the fun review. Gretchen
reply by Sankey on 02-May-2016
    So I got it wrong then?
reply by Sankey on 02-May-2016
    I live with one of those. She is pretty good hot flushes driv e her nuts. In church we are now in Fall(Autumn) and it is getting cooler but they still have the fans in church going like Aero jets for all the Menopause gals but even the pastor's wife agreed they were going too fast and she is approaching her time too hehe.
Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel
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Nice description of your own personal Summers. I was really enjoying the humor of this piece. Somehow, I feel like there's further fun you could have with this heated subject, you had my attention and I would have loved to read more.


 Comment Written 01-May-2016


reply by the author on 01-May-2016
    Oh I could go so much further with this, but decided to hold back. Thank you for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
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"And if I'm confused with an aging stripper, so be it. Maybe any extra cash I make will help with gifts for my grandkids."
I got a kick out of that .Nice poetic writing style that reflect outstanding skills and ablity.Excellent , I like the poem

 Comment Written 01-May-2016


reply by the author on 01-May-2016
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I appreciate the read and review. Gretchen
Comment from JTStone
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I remember when my girl went through that, the emotional swings were worse--the sex was better. It will get better you'll see, and then yeah, none of the annoyances--just the moodiness. If he's understanding, it can be the best time of your life.
Jimmy

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 Comment Written 01-May-2016


reply by the author on 01-May-2016
    Am not particularly a moody person, it's mainly the physical stuff that's getting me down. Thanks for the understanding review. Gretchen
Comment from RodG
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I don't know if a male reader can do this essay justice. Do I truly understand what you are talking about? No, even though my wife went "through the change." Nevertheless, I get a pretty graphic picture of what you DO when you're stricken by a hot flash and enjoyed reading this.

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 Comment Written 01-May-2016


reply by the author on 01-May-2016
    Try to picture Cindy Crawford or Kathy Ireland as a favor to me. I promise not to ever post a picture of the real me. Lol. Thanks for the wonderful review. Gretchen