Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
125,000 acres is a sizable plot of ground to be missing.
Whoever has possessing of it seems to intend to keep it theirs.
Probably the cause of "Gunter's" being killed.
However, seems a range war is about to break out.
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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125,000 acres is a sizable plot of ground to be missing.
Whoever has possessing of it seems to intend to keep it theirs.
Probably the cause of "Gunter's" being killed.
However, seems a range war is about to break out.
Comment Written 02-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Barbara, have I told you just how real those conversations 'sound' as I read them? Your dialogue is exceptional. But I do have one nit to pick with you - must you have them eating all the time? You make me hungry! (LOL - just kidding - sort of - gotta run. Snack calling. *grin*)
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Barbara, have I told you just how real those conversations 'sound' as I read them? Your dialogue is exceptional. But I do have one nit to pick with you - must you have them eating all the time? You make me hungry! (LOL - just kidding - sort of - gotta run. Snack calling. *grin*)
Comment Written 02-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Eating seems natural to me. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from Sis Cat
"Oh honey, that's a heated question. Are you sure you want to go there?"
Of course, you will go there in your next post. I enjoyed how you weaved into your story the mystery of the origin of the missing 125,000 acres. This chapter's action is shifted away from the paper documents and to where many searches go when they hit a dead end--someone who knows something. Your prose is clean and you move the story along. I enjoyed all talk about East Texas because that is where my mother is from. I look forward to reading your next chapter.
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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"Oh honey, that's a heated question. Are you sure you want to go there?"
Of course, you will go there in your next post. I enjoyed how you weaved into your story the mystery of the origin of the missing 125,000 acres. This chapter's action is shifted away from the paper documents and to where many searches go when they hit a dead end--someone who knows something. Your prose is clean and you move the story along. I enjoyed all talk about East Texas because that is where my mother is from. I look forward to reading your next chapter.
Comment Written 02-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from DonandVicki
A nice and quick chapter, I have been following your story for some time now and this is a nice continuation. I like what you have done thus far.
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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A nice and quick chapter, I have been following your story for some time now and this is a nice continuation. I like what you have done thus far.
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from ciliverde
These chapters are short, but I know that you have limited time. It's a good story, and though it seems to develop slowly because of waiting between chapters, I know it wouldn't if we could sit and read the whole thing. Maybe Alex will get some of Kuruk's pie for dessert. :)
Carol
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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These chapters are short, but I know that you have limited time. It's a good story, and though it seems to develop slowly because of waiting between chapters, I know it wouldn't if we could sit and read the whole thing. Maybe Alex will get some of Kuruk's pie for dessert. :)
Carol
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
Good continuing chapter, Barbara. These are certainly short. Do you write them as you go, and can only have time for a short chapter? I personally would post every two weeks and have my chapters go a minimum of 1200 words each. That's what I've done over the past several months. It allows me to earn more reviewing dollars I can use to promote mine higher.
Only one small concern:
He nodded at men who had followed Soni. [...at THE ? men who had followed Soni.]
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Good continuing chapter, Barbara. These are certainly short. Do you write them as you go, and can only have time for a short chapter? I personally would post every two weeks and have my chapters go a minimum of 1200 words each. That's what I've done over the past several months. It allows me to earn more reviewing dollars I can use to promote mine higher.
Only one small concern:
He nodded at men who had followed Soni. [...at THE ? men who had followed Soni.]
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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I will consider that. I am worried that if I put it off, it will be too easy to quit. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rmj09
The focus is finding the other 125,000acres.
The story line development: Alex has arrived home and Kuruk has told him to go take a shower and a change of clothes. He'll pack him some food he can take on the helicopter. On the helicopter Soni asks him if he knows where the extra 125,000acres came from. Alex says Gunther was a good gambler and that, that may have been what got him killed.
The hook no answer has been found yet.
The emotion felt that Alex is guilty about something.
The dialog continues to pull the reader forward.
Barbara, have a great week. Rita
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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The focus is finding the other 125,000acres.
The story line development: Alex has arrived home and Kuruk has told him to go take a shower and a change of clothes. He'll pack him some food he can take on the helicopter. On the helicopter Soni asks him if he knows where the extra 125,000acres came from. Alex says Gunther was a good gambler and that, that may have been what got him killed.
The hook no answer has been found yet.
The emotion felt that Alex is guilty about something.
The dialog continues to pull the reader forward.
Barbara, have a great week. Rita
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Sankey
This was great, again. Always a great read. I am, enjoying the ride and funnily enough happy to go at whatever pace you like. One spag I think probably from a Spell check programme. Thank you Google Images for imag[in]e of a helicopter.
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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This was great, again. Always a great read. I am, enjoying the ride and funnily enough happy to go at whatever pace you like. One spag I think probably from a Spell check programme. Thank you Google Images for imag[in]e of a helicopter.
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Summer is fast approaching! A well done chapter, my friend. You will soon have time to finish this and let us know the secret about the land~Debbie
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Summer is fast approaching! A well done chapter, my friend. You will soon have time to finish this and let us know the secret about the land~Debbie
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
At least the visitor isn't some drug dealer, but Alex, and with good news about Tatiana. Great work. Soni takes off the Alex in the helicopter to see Tatiana, with Kuruk and Jim to follow the next morning. Alex teases Soni about her and Jim arguing. There is still the question about the 125,000 acres. Interesting background about Dieter and Gunter. As it turns out, Gunter was quite a gambler, so maybe that has something to do with the land. Hope he didn't gamble it away. Such a great story. judi
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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At least the visitor isn't some drug dealer, but Alex, and with good news about Tatiana. Great work. Soni takes off the Alex in the helicopter to see Tatiana, with Kuruk and Jim to follow the next morning. Alex teases Soni about her and Jim arguing. There is still the question about the 125,000 acres. Interesting background about Dieter and Gunter. As it turns out, Gunter was quite a gambler, so maybe that has something to do with the land. Hope he didn't gamble it away. Such a great story. judi
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. Great chapter, as usual. judi
