It's All About You
Love Poem27 total reviews
Comment from TallySally
Hi, again. Your love poem takes a quiet, almost whispered look at the mysteries of love. It is those mysterious that root so deeply in the heart. You've penned that mystery well.
God bless and my best,
Relda
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Hi, again. Your love poem takes a quiet, almost whispered look at the mysteries of love. It is those mysterious that root so deeply in the heart. You've penned that mystery well.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you Relda
Comment from AnnaLinda
Sealord,
You surely did a phenomenal job on your love poem entry.
I enjoy the free verse form and you have done it justice here.
You seem to be quite the romantic. So you are the Poetic
Geologist? Interesting. A PG.
I like how you have added so many special attributes that
you love about this person. Your entire poem was a pleasure
to read.
"I dream of the charm of your smile
The warmth of your tender touch"
Those lines are very tender and all of your lines are
as well as respectful. I hope to read more of your
work and welcome to Fanstory.
Linda
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Sealord,
You surely did a phenomenal job on your love poem entry.
I enjoy the free verse form and you have done it justice here.
You seem to be quite the romantic. So you are the Poetic
Geologist? Interesting. A PG.
I like how you have added so many special attributes that
you love about this person. Your entire poem was a pleasure
to read.
"I dream of the charm of your smile
The warmth of your tender touch"
Those lines are very tender and all of your lines are
as well as respectful. I hope to read more of your
work and welcome to Fanstory.
Linda
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you very much for the review, I really appreciate it from the bottom of my heart. Once again Thank you
Comment from Lisa Deverick
This is the kind of poem that every girl wishes to have written about her. A beautiful collection of words that ooze out love. Quite enchanting. well done
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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This is the kind of poem that every girl wishes to have written about her. A beautiful collection of words that ooze out love. Quite enchanting. well done
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate your heartfelt review
Comment from franichm
Sealord,
I do my best to read work of those who have taken the time to review something of mine and I have stumbled upon some of the most wonderful poems and stories that way! This one melts my heart! You've touched on every aspect on the points that make a person fall in love to start with, showing that true love takes looking into ones soul. I enjoyed this very much! Franichm
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Sealord,
I do my best to read work of those who have taken the time to review something of mine and I have stumbled upon some of the most wonderful poems and stories that way! This one melts my heart! You've touched on every aspect on the points that make a person fall in love to start with, showing that true love takes looking into ones soul. I enjoyed this very much! Franichm
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you so much I appreciate
Comment from tony bronk
Well, you certainly have a long, caring, loving list of how you feel for your Love. That is noble! Your poem is written very well, and you chose words very well. Tony Bronk
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Well, you certainly have a long, caring, loving list of how you feel for your Love. That is noble! Your poem is written very well, and you chose words very well. Tony Bronk
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you Tony , I appreciate
Comment from MissMerri
I liked this love poem very much. I especially liked how the speaker describes each special detail of the loved one, from the intelligence and gentle nature through the beauty of skin and hair. You've incorporated all the senses, touch and smell, sight and sound, which makes this even more relatable to the reader. It is really strong in so many ways and a true pleasure to read.
I have a couple of grammar questions:
1. Of those little things about you
That makes (make?) you the gem you are.
2. Of the gentleness you impart on (to?) those things you touch.
3. The perfection that line (lines?) your face
4. Of your eyes that sparkles (sparkle)like 'two golden crystal (crystals?)
These are undoubtedly small typos, or perhaps I'm misunderstanding something... which often happens, but nevertheless, I love the poem and the love it describes. Best wishes in the contest. MM
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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I liked this love poem very much. I especially liked how the speaker describes each special detail of the loved one, from the intelligence and gentle nature through the beauty of skin and hair. You've incorporated all the senses, touch and smell, sight and sound, which makes this even more relatable to the reader. It is really strong in so many ways and a true pleasure to read.
I have a couple of grammar questions:
1. Of those little things about you
That makes (make?) you the gem you are.
2. Of the gentleness you impart on (to?) those things you touch.
3. The perfection that line (lines?) your face
4. Of your eyes that sparkles (sparkle)like 'two golden crystal (crystals?)
These are undoubtedly small typos, or perhaps I'm misunderstanding something... which often happens, but nevertheless, I love the poem and the love it describes. Best wishes in the contest. MM
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate
Comment from BeasPeas
I enjoyed reading your well written poem. It expresses subtle characteristics of the beloved that are often omitted from such poems, i.e., "intelligence," "the things that you say,"
and
entire sixth stanza.
There may be a typo here, please take a look:
"The sure way you carry urself (yourself).
Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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I enjoyed reading your well written poem. It expresses subtle characteristics of the beloved that are often omitted from such poems, i.e., "intelligence," "the things that you say,"
and
entire sixth stanza.
There may be a typo here, please take a look:
"The sure way you carry urself (yourself).
Marilyn
Comment Written 02-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you for your observations i appreciate
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very special one that won the heart of the author. Everything about the lady is mysterious and dreamy. A love poem that really comes straight from the heart.
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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A very special one that won the heart of the author. Everything about the lady is mysterious and dreamy. A love poem that really comes straight from the heart.
Comment Written 02-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you i feel honored
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Sealord....absolutely stunning, stellar, wonderful romance poem. To love to such depths and the be able to express it so beautifully is such a talent to behold. Loved it. Good luck in the contest...this will be a hard one to contend with!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Sealord....absolutely stunning, stellar, wonderful romance poem. To love to such depths and the be able to express it so beautifully is such a talent to behold. Loved it. Good luck in the contest...this will be a hard one to contend with!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 02-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Charming. This certainly depicts a person
in love. You practically drink in the
essence of the one you love, the one who
makes life worthwhile. I think you covered
it all here. Well done, Nancy
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Charming. This certainly depicts a person
in love. You practically drink in the
essence of the one you love, the one who
makes life worthwhile. I think you covered
it all here. Well done, Nancy
Comment Written 02-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you
