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Loud and Proud

Ya Gotta make a little NOISE sometimes!

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Comment from writeapoem
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A wonderful poem of rising above the fire darts of the devil thrown at us in life. Gramps I am one of them too. Grandchilren have a way of touching your heart to rise above adversity. Thank you for giving God credit for he has lifted me up even if I m the cause for my fall. All the best and,God Bless

 Comment Written 07-May-2016


reply by the author on 07-May-2016
    I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you!
reply by writeapoem on 07-May-2016
    Your welcome
Comment from robyn corum
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Dr. Nad. This is a super poem making up a portion of your bio, but I laughed as I read that your wife walked out and then you had two children. I thought... hmmm.... that's NOW how it USUALLY works. Was there a second wife in there somewhere? A girlfriend? An adoption agency? HELP! *smile*

Very fun about the loud talking. As I age, I see a lot of that going on around me!!! hahahaha

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. My second wife is the mother of my two children and has stayed with me for nearly 37 years. (I don't think she is leaving.) LOL May God bless you!
Comment from Caressa_08
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I liked your true poem with a very nice photo displayed, I think of your two children and you. What happened to you is not easy though with the grace of God, I see you made it through it, and they did too, and you now a being a Grandpa, the years sure do fly by, and hope now that you are having the time of your life.

Best wishes for your wonderful entry...Caressa_08

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. I am enjoying a great life now. May God bless you!
Comment from michaelcahill
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I love your attitude throughout this piece. It doesn't cover up the seriousness of the life you've led but it sure adds a lot of determination to not let it get you down. I'm kind of the same way and I'll bet I'm just as loud. HAHAHA! Great writing. Uplifting and inspirational. Keep shouting, it works for me and I can see it's working for you. mikey

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you!
Comment from Pantygynt
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I wonder if your hearing loss, like mine was due to too many guns going off in your youth, or was it to much of that loud rock and roll that our generation was prone to keep listening. Of course it need not be noise deafness at all and I should mid my own business really, but I recognize bits of this as applying to me.

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. I believe Rock and Roll music and genetics. May God bless you!
Comment from dmt1967
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This poem made me smile. I am glad you found someone and have your faith to fall back on. I liked this poem and think it is a good entry in the contest. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you!
Comment from tony bronk
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Okay, now I see! At first I was wondering just what "yelling" had to do with anything? Now I know. A good and funny poem. Tony Bronk

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you!
reply by tony bronk on 03-May-2016
    I totally understand what you are telling me. My family runs if they think I am going to talk to them about a new poem of mine. (laughing) You have the ability and innate nature to help you grow...so grow! I'll keep an eye on you...okay? Tony Bronk self-righteous poet
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
    I am very pleased to hear from you and love to follow what you do and have you follow the things that I write. This is a great place for those of us who don't have another literary outlet. Embrace the love from above!
Comment from Gloria ....
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Well Dr. Nad, I must say this is a delightful poem on account of because bios are the best.

It sounds like you've had a full life and now you're ready to make some noise, and we are ready to listen.

Great job with this.

Gloria

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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An interesting bio story in a poem contest entry. I'm sorry about your hearing. Mine is too good. I hear everything, some of which I would rather note. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you!
Comment from melyuki
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Hi Dr Nad thanks for sharing this awesome little bio about your life thus far. Love the rhyming throughout and the verse flows well as your story unfolds. Delightful ending verse that depicts why Gramps now shouts... too funny. grandkids never hold back with the truth do they. I can see why you feel proud and thanks for sharing an intimate part of your life's journey. Happy smiles to you, cheers mel x

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you!