Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Untitled"NaPoWriMo April 2016
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Comment from jusylee72
what a gorgeous picture. So beautifully described with your vibrant words. I also very much like the way you spaced the words in a pretty pattern. Thank you for the images./
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what a gorgeous picture. So beautifully described with your vibrant words. I also very much like the way you spaced the words in a pretty pattern. Thank you for the images./
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
Excellent romantic illustrations to help the reader understand the poem more clearly .Good writing skills and great job putting it together
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Excellent romantic illustrations to help the reader understand the poem more clearly .Good writing skills and great job putting it together
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
Comment from Domino 2
Two excellent metaphors on the pleasures of oral sex, Debs.
Very poetically exotic, sensual and tasteful (excuse the pun LOL).
OR, maybe you're just a weirdo who likes crawling round the garden licking all the flowers. Now, that would also be a sexy sight. Hahaha.
Excellent.
Cheers, Ray xx
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Two excellent metaphors on the pleasures of oral sex, Debs.
Very poetically exotic, sensual and tasteful (excuse the pun LOL).
OR, maybe you're just a weirdo who likes crawling round the garden licking all the flowers. Now, that would also be a sexy sight. Hahaha.
Excellent.
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
Comment from ~Dovey
Yay!! Today is the last day!!
Great job keeping up all month, Debra! I am so happy that you joined in the fun!
Good luck!
Kim.
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Yay!! Today is the last day!!
Great job keeping up all month, Debra! I am so happy that you joined in the fun!
Good luck!
Kim.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
Comment from lightink
Wow! Just as we get to the end of obligations a sudden burst of inspiration - beautiful concrete imagery that also makes an incredibly good and sensual metaphor! Stunning!
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Wow! Just as we get to the end of obligations a sudden burst of inspiration - beautiful concrete imagery that also makes an incredibly good and sensual metaphor! Stunning!
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
