Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Niggled"NaPoWriMo April 2016
8 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
I love that word, Niggled. Needs to be added to my language list, Debra, have not added for a long time. A dog and his bone, do not come between them. and there will be more buried out there somewhere.
great penning
lulube
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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I love that word, Niggled. Needs to be added to my language list, Debra, have not added for a long time. A dog and his bone, do not come between them. and there will be more buried out there somewhere.
great penning
lulube
Comment Written 02-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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A belated thank you :)
Comment from misscookie
Wow!
That's a big bone
I love the words to your write
I remember that saying . And its so true. Why bring up the pass it's over.
Today is a new day, for things to remember for tomorrow
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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Wow!
That's a big bone
I love the words to your write
I remember that saying . And its so true. Why bring up the pass it's over.
Today is a new day, for things to remember for tomorrow
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 01-May-2016
Comment from BeasPeas
A very good analogy, Debra. We do take out those memories and relive them--just as a dog with a bone we are reluctant to let go. On the other hand, thoughts never hurt anybody. Marilyn
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A very good analogy, Debra. We do take out those memories and relive them--just as a dog with a bone we are reluctant to let go. On the other hand, thoughts never hurt anybody. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
The 5-7-5 poem is excellent, Debra, but the author notes aren't. Raking over the past must be nipped in the bud, my friend. You are going to keep being hurt otherwise. You've done your bit to put things right. Love you loads, my friend. xxx Sandra
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The 5-7-5 poem is excellent, Debra, but the author notes aren't. Raking over the past must be nipped in the bud, my friend. You are going to keep being hurt otherwise. You've done your bit to put things right. Love you loads, my friend. xxx Sandra
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Debra,
I enjoyed your poem. The picture is perfect.
Sleeping dog wakens,
strips meat from remembered bone...
savours the flavour.
Your poem has a double meaning--about the dog and how some people bring up past issues as you said.
I like the British spellings of the last line [I know not part of the review, but, it is still interesting].
Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan
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Debra,
I enjoyed your poem. The picture is perfect.
Sleeping dog wakens,
strips meat from remembered bone...
savours the flavour.
Your poem has a double meaning--about the dog and how some people bring up past issues as you said.
I like the British spellings of the last line [I know not part of the review, but, it is still interesting].
Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
Comment from royowen
A beautiful dog Debra, looks like a Great Dane, yours? Well done, another delicacy to add to your impressive collection of short anecdotal poems, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
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A beautiful dog Debra, looks like a Great Dane, yours? Well done, another delicacy to add to your impressive collection of short anecdotal poems, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
Comment from krys123
Hello Debra;
-your 5/7/5 syllabic format was full of dramatic imagery that was definitively expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive as it described and expressed the feeling standing and actions of a dog who wakes up and devours its bone.
- the pictures very appropriate, relative and supportive to the meaning, concept and theme of your writing.
- thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
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Hello Debra;
-your 5/7/5 syllabic format was full of dramatic imagery that was definitively expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive as it described and expressed the feeling standing and actions of a dog who wakes up and devours its bone.
- the pictures very appropriate, relative and supportive to the meaning, concept and theme of your writing.
- thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
Comment from Douglas Paul
This is a really good analogy since I am assuming it is really more about the someone who brought the past up again than it is about a dog - well done
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This is a really good analogy since I am assuming it is really more about the someone who brought the past up again than it is about a dog - well done
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
