Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Ah romantic sweet verses and admittance
of deep passionate love. Short but sweet. Photo mesmerizing. liberty justice

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 02-May-2016

Thank you so much. Liberty, Glad you liked it. All the best.Ulla:))

reply by Liberty Justice on 02-May-2016

Good luck contest today.

Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

hello poet

the format is true to form and count
your words define passion
well done

thank you for sharing your talent
you have met the challenge with format and theme
best of luck with the contest
ann marie

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thank you so much, ann marie. Glad you liked liked. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

The brief words in your poem are expressive. The theme to me is very warm and full of emotion. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day.
Bill

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thanks a lot, Bill. Very much appreciated. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

This is very passionate, but with respect, I think you can be more precise to explain HOW your 'feelings run wild' - even in word economy, and perhaps by using metaphor.

You obviously have the gift of expression, so why not elevate it to the next level of originality?

Well done, Ray xx

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016

Hi Ray, so pleased with your review and praise. Wish I could live up to your expectations. I know what you are saying. Raked my brains and came up with a blank. I will have to try harder next time. All the best.

reply by Domino 2 on 30-Apr-2016

Thanks your extremely gracious reply. As I said, you have a gift, and I didn't mean to sound too harsh. It's always easier to criticise (though that wasn't my real intention) than to create.

Ray

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016

Hi Ray, I know it was not a critisism. It is meant as a compliment and taken as such. I hope I can live up to it. I'm very pleased with your comments. Ulla xx

reply by Domino 2 on 30-Apr-2016

Thanks again, Ulla - you're very sweet. Ray XX

Comment from Judvan2

Excellent

Good 5-7-5 poem. Has a complete idea and good visual. Artwork enhances the poem. You should do good in the contest. Lots of luck to you!

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thanks ever so much. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from dragonpoet

Good

This is a terse description of true love. This Erteish stylized female kind of eminates the feeling of the words.

Hope you did well in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016

Well it's supposed to be passionate love, and what's terse about that? It's beautiful if you are lucky enough to encounter it. Please explain Erteish style to me: never heard about it. Could google it, I suppose. But would prefer that you explain it so I understand it in the context of my innocent 5-7-5 poem. Voting not even started, so we'll see. All best

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Apr-2016

Erte is an artist who was know to paint women like this.

Terse, meaning the poem is short but full of meaning. I agree that true love is beautiful and should be cherished.

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016

Thanks for coming back on this. I'm learning all the time, but 'terse' to me is a very negative word and rather aggressive. I couldn't be further from that in my 5-7-5. I mean and meant passionate love.

Comment from Jonadab Ezerie

Excellent

I am very impressed with your work. It gives me the encouragement to improve my writing skill. Unique writing skills. Nice job Keep it up

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thanks ever so much, and for all your praise. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Mystery Author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, beautifully warm and inviting words and I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thanks a lot Eric, I'm so very pleased. Glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))

reply by Eric1 on 03-May-2016

You are very welcome my friend.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

And that says it all! This is an excellent romantic 5-7-5 contest entry, and if we can say that about the person in our life, then we have got it right. Wonderful words, and perfect for the contest. Good luck! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Hi Sandra, thanks ever so much. I'm so pleased being so new to poetry. Whole new world for me. All the best. Ulla xxx

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

This is such a lovely five seven five and the picture is so very great too. An excellent entry to this romantic contest. Way to go. See you at voting dear.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thanks a lot Angie for the lovely review. All the best. Ulla:)))

reply by foxangie123 on 01-May-2016

You deserve it. Your work is like magic..