Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

This is a fantastic picture of choice and a wonderful entry to the contest at hand. Your lines are really great and go with so perfect. Very nice.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. Feel honoured to receive such an encouraging review : )

Comment from candyfink

Excellent

This is well written. It gave me the chills a little because in my mind, the color reminds me of ice cold things. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thank you so much for your kind review, very much appreciated : )

Comment from Jonadab Ezerie

Excellent

Poetically flawless and structurally sound in that it flows really well between each line. Great job. I loved the line "Tears fall crystal as turquoise ripples lick my heels "

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thank you for such an encouraging review. It is much appreciated : )

Comment from Naham Mills

Excellent

Wow. Im speechless. This really hits home for me. Nice work. Grammatically flawless and structurally sound. I think there could be remnants of your memories which may still be haunting your present state of mind, at least in your unconscious mind perhaps?

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thank you for your very encouraging review.
I did go through a desperately sad time a few years back and I drew on all the feelings I had at the time for this piece.
Thanks again.....and for the stars! Very much appreciated : )

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It does no good to keep a negative attitude when you are down. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Many thanks for your kind review.
This is a memory of a very dark time for me...one that sometimes crawls back to remind me.
Thanks again, very much appreciated : )

Comment from LisaD123

Excellent

This is a well-written and deeply melancholic poem which fits the image perfectly. The alliterative phrases are particularly effective and the reader can empathise with the person's feelings. Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thank you so much for your encouraging review. It is greatly appreciated : )

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

Author, I love these poems inspired by artwork. I have to say you gave risen to the challenge with a beautiful but so melancholy work. Wonderfully executed. Best wishes with the challenge.

Jlsavell

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 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thank you for such an encouraging review and for your best wishes : )