Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

This is so beautiful! No wonder it won first place in this contest. Blue, the color of sadness, so cleverly described in these lines, seems to be part of the speaker's sad dream. "Tears fall crystal," and "fleeting whispers form words I cannot hear," are especially poetic phrases that I loved. The final line is a perfect closing for this beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016

Thank you so much for such an encouraging review. I was thrilled with the win : )

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Kazzawin,

Congratulations on your contest win!
This is truly a beautiful free verse
interpretation of that artwork.

You have very unique imagery
with well chosen words. I enjoyed
all of you "s" alliteration in it and
how you repeated blue dreams
theme.

Linda

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thank you so much Linda, for your lovely comments and review.
I was so thrilled to win the contest and to have my work recognised.
It's a great feeling : )

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Oh my goodness - I would never equate the color blue with sadness. However, it does have the meaning of being sad which is what you are portraying in this spectacular presentation. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thank you so much for your kind review.
I have always equated blue with sadness . . . i.e 'feeling blue' although I love the colour : )

Comment from marion

Excellent

Wow - this is beautifully presented. Has mood, has beauty. is haunting. Good Luck in this writing Prompt competition. A high standard entry and no doubt a strong contender. Marion.

 Comment Written 04-May-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Many thanks for your kind review : )

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very nice and nicely done, Congrats on winning the prompt with this piece on feeling blue. Great job and thought on getting this done. have a wonderful evening

 Comment Written 04-May-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Many thanks for you kind review. Much appreciated : )

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, this poem is perfectly rendered in its rhythmical free verse - the words are beautifully constructed and the lyric flow inviting in its read - I can think of nothing that could enhance this lovely poem...

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thank you so much for your kind review : )

reply by evesayshi on 01-May-2016

You are so welcome - my pleasure...

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the contest
A free verse poem of blue on blue
Dreams of blue, azure and turquoise
sapphire and sad, blue has its own spectrum
from happiness to sadness
Excellent interpretation of the fine art work
Very well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review : )

Comment from Ima L. Ami

Excellent

Beautiful poem. Well written with flowing words that are easy to read. I really like how you used so many different shades/colors of blue throughout the poem. Very well thought out. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review : )

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

Forever Blue is a sitting piece for the FanArtReview Art - Cleo85 writing prompt entry . It is a sad Requiem of one who is unable to get sweet elusive rest and tranquility in the arms of beautiful loving warm, receptive dreams. Nights of sadness and melancholy are not mingled with those of tranquility. Thanks for sharing. And may God bless you!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016

Thank you so very much for your kind review...very much appreciated : )

reply by Dr. Nad on 30-Apr-2016

You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

This is a very good entry into the FanArtReviewArt - Cleo85 contest. Loved the content...reads very smoothly aloud, which I did several times. Great word choices for imagery and feeling and the artwork chosen is a perfect accompaniment. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment . . . feel really chuffed that you read it aloud.
So encouraged, many thanks : )