Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Is children's peace about the weasel was well written rich and team as well as energy flows alright well and had no grammar issue so to speak objective and subjective contents were firmly in place in the script and measures along perfectly thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018

Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad someone still reads Wally's stories.

Comment from MariMc

Excellent

This is a charming, delightful poem. Children will love the humor and the fact that it's really a clever story told in rhyme. It made me smile. The artwork is cute too. Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016

Thank you. I'm happy you like it. Thank you for reading and reviewing it. 8-)

Comment from Jonadab Ezerie

Excellent

I love the story line .Words were very well constructed and articulate. Very easy to comprehend. Your style of writing is unique

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016

Thank you for your kind words. I'm happy you enjoyed the story.

Is unique a nice way of saying odd? 8-)

reply by Jonadab Ezerie on 29-Apr-2016

No, it stands out .Very Good

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016

Thank you. I was just teasing you. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 01-May-2016

Thank you. I was just teasing you. 8-)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Wally the Weasel...that Wrascally Wabbit (to coin an old Loony Tunes, Elmer Fudd phrase, lol). Okay, I'm fully aware that dear Wally is NOT a rabbit, but one-hundred percent weasel. I also fully understand that this is a wonderfully written, cheefrfully delightful poem fofr kids of all ages.
Heck, even I loved this, and I';m hardly a kid (although opinions do vary greatly where that's concerned. Ahem.

Wonderfully written, your Wally the Weasel, damommy.

Good stuff!
~Dean Kuch

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. You've given me such a gracious review. I'm happy you like Wally. Like you, I'm a kid inside - about 8 years old. That's what I tell my grandchildren, and it's true.

We get old when we cease to have fun, right?

Again, thank you for a lovely review. 8-)

reply by Dean Kuch on 28-Apr-2016

You're absolutely right about that.
You are also very welcome. :)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Wally is very brave to learn to roller skate and smart to use a helmet to protect his head in case he falls. He certainly will be the first rolling artist.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Yes, he will. Thank you for reading and reviewing this. I'm happy you're enjoying Wally's escapades. 8-)

Comment from AnnaLinda

Exceptional

Yvonne,

I see you have another Wally hit! How cute those little wheels are that
you put on his feet. Nice lines on the canvas too. Where's his red helmet?
This was a delight to read with it smooth flowing lines, nice rhymes and
fun story.

The world' first rolling artist! LOL I like how he gives new things a try and
has a positive attitude even when he falls. He just gets right back up and
carries on. Great lesson for young ones.

Linda

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thank you. I forgot about the helmet. Darn! 8-)

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Wonderful aabb rhyme, rhythm, flow, and meter. Wally the Rolling Painting Artist. I like that! A fun poem that made me smile.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

If it made you smile, then I've done my job. I'm so glad you are enjoying Wally. Thank you for a very nice review. 8-)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I love the photo you sketched on this. The wording you used was great as well. I read it aloud in my mind and thought of my grandson and how he would laugh at it. hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thank you. How old is your grandson? 8-)

Comment from Lancer1979

Excellent

How delightful, my dear friend. I was feeling kinda blue today...maybe because I'm going to have a birthday on Saturday. The big "55".... lol! Reading more of Wally Weasel's antics put a smile on my face, and I thank you for that! :)

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

55? You're just a youngster. I want to wish you Happy Birthday a little early.

Thank you for reading Wally. I hope he cheered you up a bit. He wishes you Happy Birthday, too. 8-)

Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

Another excellent addition to your Wally the Weasel portfolio. I am running out of things to say other than I enjoy them so much. You have somehow endeared this little imaginary creature into my heart.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016

I'm so glad. He's sort of moved into my heart, too. I wonder why?

Thank you for always being a loyal supporter. I appreciate it so very much. 8-)