Intuition
Intuition is the sixth sense86 total reviews
Comment from Domino 2
I'm not sure intuition is real, and I think it's more of a feeling based on observant and thoughtful experience.
Anyway, it's all very well having it, but putting it to the good for ourselves and others is maybe another gift. Not much point in being intuitive and expecting to have our head chopped off by a passing upside-down helicopter, and then forgetting to duck. ;-)
Excellent definition of 'intuition', as you see it, and you imply it's always a positive thing, which can't be bad.
With respect, I think poetic meter is a MUST in rhymed/structured poetry, for a far smoother read, and this needs work in that department...if you're interested, of course.
An entertaining and well thought out post.
Cheers, Ray
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I'm not sure intuition is real, and I think it's more of a feeling based on observant and thoughtful experience.
Anyway, it's all very well having it, but putting it to the good for ourselves and others is maybe another gift. Not much point in being intuitive and expecting to have our head chopped off by a passing upside-down helicopter, and then forgetting to duck. ;-)
Excellent definition of 'intuition', as you see it, and you imply it's always a positive thing, which can't be bad.
With respect, I think poetic meter is a MUST in rhymed/structured poetry, for a far smoother read, and this needs work in that department...if you're interested, of course.
An entertaining and well thought out post.
Cheers, Ray
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Domino 2,
I'm glad you enjoyed it in an interesting way.
Thank you very much for your nice words and suggestions.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Intuition and following it are very good traits. I'm not sure all have it or at least they are not perspective enough to follow it. But again many don't have common sense either:)
I enjoyed your poem.
Teresa
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Intuition and following it are very good traits. I'm not sure all have it or at least they are not perspective enough to follow it. But again many don't have common sense either:)
I enjoyed your poem.
Teresa
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello TAB_that's me,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your frank and lovely comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Ulla
How true is it, RPSaxena, that we have a sixth sense which very often is the one that guides us in the right direction. You describe so well in this poem what so often happens to me. Well written and well phrased. I enjoyed your words of wisdom. All the best. Ulla:)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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How true is it, RPSaxena, that we have a sixth sense which very often is the one that guides us in the right direction. You describe so well in this poem what so often happens to me. Well written and well phrased. I enjoyed your words of wisdom. All the best. Ulla:)
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Ulla,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments backed by '5 + 1 shiny' - SIX STARS.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from pamelaperron
I really enjoyed your poem, especially the ending. as I say energy and love never dissipate, it only changes form. I am divorced with a couple of kids of which I say this about their father and I. the only thing you might want to ponder is starting a line with the word "And". great job...pamela
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I really enjoyed your poem, especially the ending. as I say energy and love never dissipate, it only changes form. I am divorced with a couple of kids of which I say this about their father and I. the only thing you might want to ponder is starting a line with the word "And". great job...pamela
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Pamelaperron,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and also hinting at your favorite lines.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from tony bronk
I've always been aware of our sixth sense, but until reading your poem here, I never gave it so much thought as all these matters. Excellent write! Tony
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I've always been aware of our sixth sense, but until reading your poem here, I never gave it so much thought as all these matters. Excellent write! Tony
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Tony Bronk,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Ben Colder
Reminded me of the little saying about the train going up the steep hill. I think I can, I think I can. Going down hill, I thought I could, I thought I could. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Reminded me of the little saying about the train going up the steep hill. I think I can, I think I can. Going down hill, I thought I could, I thought I could. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Ben Colder,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Best Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from johnwilson
This is such a well written poem. I wish I had an extra star; however, my "intuition" was not in rhyme! (The picture was perfect for the piece yet it stood so well on its own that nothing was needed to augment it.) The only thing I would change would be to omit the word "tons" in the second stanza. Bravo!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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This is such a well written poem. I wish I had an extra star; however, my "intuition" was not in rhyme! (The picture was perfect for the piece yet it stood so well on its own that nothing was needed to augment it.) The only thing I would change would be to omit the word "tons" in the second stanza. Bravo!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Johnwilson,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your lovely views and comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello RPSaxena
I like your well rhymed poem saying that
Intuition is the sixth sense
Resides veiled in every being,
I believe it's true my dear passed away mother had predictions from her dreams which did come true
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello RPSaxena
I like your well rhymed poem saying that
Intuition is the sixth sense
Resides veiled in every being,
I believe it's true my dear passed away mother had predictions from her dreams which did come true
Gert
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Gert Sherwood,
I'm glad you enjoyed it and sad to know about your mother's demise. May God grant her soul peace!
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and also quoting your favorite lines which gives me a personal touch.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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Smiles RP you are welcome
Gert
Comment from I. J. Fox
Well structured. Evenly paced. Some difficulty in the rhythm here and there. Also, certain word choice seemed a bit . . . quaint? Not necessarily a problem, but the subject matter seems to lend itself towards the ethereal, mystical, or mysterious even. Therefore, is the vocabulary used matches the tone of the subject more, it raises the overall quality significantly. Still, nicely done.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Well structured. Evenly paced. Some difficulty in the rhythm here and there. Also, certain word choice seemed a bit . . . quaint? Not necessarily a problem, but the subject matter seems to lend itself towards the ethereal, mystical, or mysterious even. Therefore, is the vocabulary used matches the tone of the subject more, it raises the overall quality significantly. Still, nicely done.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Thank you.
Comment from VaV-VOOM
Very nice, and true. In your comment you say "Nothing succeeds as success succeeds success" this is Deep, and I love it. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Very nice, and true. In your comment you say "Nothing succeeds as success succeeds success" this is Deep, and I love it. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello VaV - VOOM,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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Your welcome. VaV-VOOM!
