Intuition
Intuition is the sixth sense86 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
When you make just the right move at just the right time. When you avoid catastrophe by the time and space of a human hair. When you come up with the perfect thing to say at the precise time it is required. You shrug and say that you got lucky. Did you really? Or was it that something known as instinct, taht part of us that has become ingrained by remembering what we should have done before but only thought to do or say just seconds too late. Over a period of time if we pay attention we become expert at making the right moves , saying the right things at just the right time. That I believe, is trained instinct. Very good poem.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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When you make just the right move at just the right time. When you avoid catastrophe by the time and space of a human hair. When you come up with the perfect thing to say at the precise time it is required. You shrug and say that you got lucky. Did you really? Or was it that something known as instinct, taht part of us that has become ingrained by remembering what we should have done before but only thought to do or say just seconds too late. Over a period of time if we pay attention we become expert at making the right moves , saying the right things at just the right time. That I believe, is trained instinct. Very good poem.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Hello Nomi,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and thought provoking comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Jamie P
You have a very well written poem here. I had to read it three times to really get the words through but I was pleased to find that with each read I discovered a new line spoke to me. Nice job
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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You have a very well written poem here. I had to read it three times to really get the words through but I was pleased to find that with each read I discovered a new line spoke to me. Nice job
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Hello Lilac,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Rookette
This is a very unique and great approach to the subject. I like how you define intuition as the 6th sense! The picture is the perfect compliment for this poem. Great job and good luck in the contest!! xoLeslie
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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This is a very unique and great approach to the subject. I like how you define intuition as the 6th sense! The picture is the perfect compliment for this poem. Great job and good luck in the contest!! xoLeslie
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Hello Rookette,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Writeling
Hi, A clever look at this subject, from someone who seems to know. I really like some of your phrasing:
'Hovering just close to each life,'
and
'Having full trust like a true fan'
With best wishes, Writeling
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi, A clever look at this subject, from someone who seems to know. I really like some of your phrasing:
'Hovering just close to each life,'
and
'Having full trust like a true fan'
With best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Writeling,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Best Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a really good faith entry and I enjoyed the way it was written. I liked the flow and the theme of this contest entry. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this poem.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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This is a really good faith entry and I enjoyed the way it was written. I liked the flow and the theme of this contest entry. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Dmt1967,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from rjuselius
This is an interesting piece of poetry dear friend ! I like the way you have described intuition as the sixth sense . You have captured the essence of intuition in your poem.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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This is an interesting piece of poetry dear friend ! I like the way you have described intuition as the sixth sense . You have captured the essence of intuition in your poem.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Rjuselius,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Blessings.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from LisaD123
This is a talented and eloquent poem which is cleverly structured. The rhyme helps to link the ideas together and enables the reader to follow the effects of intuition. The alliterative phrases makes the poem an interesting aural experience for the reader. The image compliments the poem perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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This is a talented and eloquent poem which is cleverly structured. The rhyme helps to link the ideas together and enables the reader to follow the effects of intuition. The alliterative phrases makes the poem an interesting aural experience for the reader. The image compliments the poem perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Hello LisaD123,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an extraordinary treatise about actuality in the real world, the presence of the inner mind, defined as the 6th sense. This work is well constructed in a poetic essay, challenging the reader to accept awareness of a reality that, if freed, would surely elevate the lives of us all...
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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In my opinion, an extraordinary treatise about actuality in the real world, the presence of the inner mind, defined as the 6th sense. This work is well constructed in a poetic essay, challenging the reader to accept awareness of a reality that, if freed, would surely elevate the lives of us all...
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Hello Evesayshi,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You are very welcome - my pleasure...
Comment from DR DIP
Intuition, the 6th sense I like that Nicely written in ABAB rhyme scheme
really like this verse:
In its tune if we play our role
Having full trust like a true fan,
None can deprive us of the goal
Pursued with a wisely framed plan.
thanks for sharing with us
dip
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Intuition, the 6th sense I like that Nicely written in ABAB rhyme scheme
really like this verse:
In its tune if we play our role
Having full trust like a true fan,
None can deprive us of the goal
Pursued with a wisely framed plan.
thanks for sharing with us
dip
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Hello DR DIP,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from artisart4u
Your poem about intuition is very good and it rhymes well.
People talk about the sixth sense, now I think I understand what they are saying
a little better.
Is this what they call the "gut feeling"?
Good luck with your psychological or philological poem.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Your poem about intuition is very good and it rhymes well.
People talk about the sixth sense, now I think I understand what they are saying
a little better.
Is this what they call the "gut feeling"?
Good luck with your psychological or philological poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Hello Artisart4u,
What a wonderful review this is!
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments, Good Luck Wishes and the most coveted SIX STARS!
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
