Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
I like the way Kuruk reveals the Adler family history, although his revelations seem to be slowed a bit by too many details, Are they all relevant to the current situation?
Perhaps the knock on the door will speed things up.?
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Hi Barbara:)
I like the way Kuruk reveals the Adler family history, although his revelations seem to be slowed a bit by too many details, Are they all relevant to the current situation?
Perhaps the knock on the door will speed things up.?
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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I will consider your review about too much history. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from barkingdog
Hi, barbara.
My but you're busy with both school and jury duty.
You're doing a fine job with filling us in on the history behind the land that Soni and Jim are trying to locate the deed for. Let's hope they find something finalized.
:) e
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Hi, barbara.
My but you're busy with both school and jury duty.
You're doing a fine job with filling us in on the history behind the land that Soni and Jim are trying to locate the deed for. Let's hope they find something finalized.
:) e
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from sage17611
I have to catch up the on previous chapters to be up to speed, but what I've read seems to be interesting enough to get caught up on your story. I really enjoyed your ability to switch between characters, bringing them to life in the story. This is a very well written story, which sounds interesting. Nice read, good job.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I have to catch up the on previous chapters to be up to speed, but what I've read seems to be interesting enough to get caught up on your story. I really enjoyed your ability to switch between characters, bringing them to life in the story. This is a very well written story, which sounds interesting. Nice read, good job.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from boxergirl
Countdown time...I remember that so well. And jury duty to boot!
More interesting information revealed today but with more yet to come. Now who could be at the door? :-)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Countdown time...I remember that so well. And jury duty to boot!
More interesting information revealed today but with more yet to come. Now who could be at the door? :-)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Oh yes. Thank you for the kind review. The count down is no fun.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
I must say, I like how you're providing the history as you write these posts. I find it interesting, since I know next to nothing about that part of the world. So, their investigations continue, trying to put the pieces of this puzzle together.
Good post, Barbara. Didn't spot any nits.
:)
Av
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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I must say, I like how you're providing the history as you write these posts. I find it interesting, since I know next to nothing about that part of the world. So, their investigations continue, trying to put the pieces of this puzzle together.
Good post, Barbara. Didn't spot any nits.
:)
Av
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you/
Comment from Serendipity!
Grandfather's eyes met hers. (what were his eyes saying? twinkled, looked stern, sober or??) Hmm, what will be happening next that caused Soni to stand just because a door opened.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Grandfather's eyes met hers. (what were his eyes saying? twinkled, looked stern, sober or??) Hmm, what will be happening next that caused Soni to stand just because a door opened.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from tuscer02
Very well written. The history lesson and the characters integrate well. The story line is strong and the plot moves along in a believable manner.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Very well written. The history lesson and the characters integrate well. The story line is strong and the plot moves along in a believable manner.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I'm enjoying the love story in this, Barbara, but also the history of Texas has been very interesting for me. I think you've done a good job of creating the characters in the family as part of that history, Giddy
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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I'm enjoying the love story in this, Barbara, but also the history of Texas has been very interesting for me. I think you've done a good job of creating the characters in the family as part of that history, Giddy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Thank you for the kind review. Aren't we all part of our ancestors?
Comment from DonandVicki
A historical story that is full of adventure. You pulled me into the story with your well thought out plot. The story flows quite smoothly, an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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A historical story that is full of adventure. You pulled me into the story with your well thought out plot. The story flows quite smoothly, an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, my friend. another sensational chapter. You are really getting the hanf of inserting details in your writes. Like these:
" Soni's eyes widened as she spoke."
"he ran his finger under the words" (switch that around though and put it before " "Says here"
And: Here: ""I guess nobody liked the Comanche." Jim closed his book."
Suggestions: I have none. Good job, Barbara. X Bob
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Hi, my friend. another sensational chapter. You are really getting the hanf of inserting details in your writes. Like these:
" Soni's eyes widened as she spoke."
"he ran his finger under the words" (switch that around though and put it before " "Says here"
And: Here: ""I guess nobody liked the Comanche." Jim closed his book."
Suggestions: I have none. Good job, Barbara. X Bob
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Thank you for the suggestions. I appreciate the help/
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Your details really are improving your writing. You may not be aware of it yet....but put more, more more in....You will be surprised at the change and it will become a writing habit for you. :) Bob
