Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Little Witch"NaPoWriMo April 2016
10 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
Everybody has bad behavior days. I'm sure by the time I write this review your Becca will be a little angel again. Your poem is well written and enjoyable with just the right touch of humor. Evi
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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Everybody has bad behavior days. I'm sure by the time I write this review your Becca will be a little angel again. Your poem is well written and enjoyable with just the right touch of humor. Evi
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016
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Belated thank you x
Comment from misscookie
Love the artwork that you choose to go with your poem
I had to smile as I read each line. My great-grand daughter Madison went on a took late week she is three years old.
Cookie
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Love the artwork that you choose to go with your poem
I had to smile as I read each line. My great-grand daughter Madison went on a took late week she is three years old.
Cookie
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
Comment from lightink
Poor girl! She might be going through some intense and confusing feelings that she haven't learned to handle yet! So, now you are both stuck with the aftermath!
I'm sorry, Dear!
You still manage to add tons of sweetness to this!
Your love shows :)!
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Poor girl! She might be going through some intense and confusing feelings that she haven't learned to handle yet! So, now you are both stuck with the aftermath!
I'm sorry, Dear!
You still manage to add tons of sweetness to this!
Your love shows :)!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh the joys of childhood.
I had twins that this reminded me of .
Nicely rhymed and very well stated as she had her off day...maybe two...maybe three. But remember...she does it out of love.
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Oh the joys of childhood.
I had twins that this reminded me of .
Nicely rhymed and very well stated as she had her off day...maybe two...maybe three. But remember...she does it out of love.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Debra,
I enjoyed your poem for its rhyme and message--not to condone her behavior.
Good job expressing your feelings. The picture is perfect.
Take care. Jan
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Debra,
I enjoyed your poem for its rhyme and message--not to condone her behavior.
Good job expressing your feelings. The picture is perfect.
Take care. Jan
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
Comment from BeasPeas
For your sake I hope so, too. You are so clever, Debra. I enjoy your humorous poems. They give a slice of your daily life that is charming. Image to accompany this poem works perfectly with your words. Marilyn
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For your sake I hope so, too. You are so clever, Debra. I enjoy your humorous poems. They give a slice of your daily life that is charming. Image to accompany this poem works perfectly with your words. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
Comment from Leineco
Ah - too soon the middle years bloom
An angel on day - near demon the next
(momma looks 'round for hidden broom
sure that her child's been hexed!)
Tomorrow, perhaps, all this will pass
but, then again, maybe - alas
the sugar and spice may have turned
and new coping skills needs to be learned!
;-)
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Ah - too soon the middle years bloom
An angel on day - near demon the next
(momma looks 'round for hidden broom
sure that her child's been hexed!)
Tomorrow, perhaps, all this will pass
but, then again, maybe - alas
the sugar and spice may have turned
and new coping skills needs to be learned!
;-)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
If you have kids, you'll have that. Some days they are so sweet and other days all the buttons are pushed. Cute poem. I hope your tomorrow is better, my friend~Debbie
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If you have kids, you'll have that. Some days they are so sweet and other days all the buttons are pushed. Cute poem. I hope your tomorrow is better, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
Comment from kiwisteveh
This is a sweet reflection on your little girl's behaviour - I don't think I would class it as biographical, however...
Three rhyming couplets work well to tell this story and your hope that it is only temporary - I'm sure it is.
I have a couple of tiny suggestions for improving the flow in the last couplet. How about this?
I hope tomorrow morning brings my Becca back to me --
without the touch of witchiness and minus misery.
Steve
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This is a sweet reflection on your little girl's behaviour - I don't think I would class it as biographical, however...
Three rhyming couplets work well to tell this story and your hope that it is only temporary - I'm sure it is.
I have a couple of tiny suggestions for improving the flow in the last couplet. How about this?
I hope tomorrow morning brings my Becca back to me --
without the touch of witchiness and minus misery.
Steve
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
We all have those days with our children, fortunately, it doesn't last. At least, it stops when they want something! Back to school tomorrow, so smile, Debra! This brings back many warm memories, lol! Lovely, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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We all have those days with our children, fortunately, it doesn't last. At least, it stops when they want something! Back to school tomorrow, so smile, Debra! This brings back many warm memories, lol! Lovely, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
