Comment from joeruptak

Excellent

What you wrote is very well done
reading it was lots of fun
rhyme and rhythm were really good,
the flow made it easily understood
you make me jealous that is true
because I cannot write as well as you

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Oh heavens, that was sweet, but I bet you have your own story to tell and I for one would like to hear it.

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

The green eyed monster of jealousy. A woman scorned but hath no fury just sadness
I am sure there are many woman out there who have gone through this "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" or just accept her loss in heartbreak

dip

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

I remember feeling this way when I was young. Now I wouldn't ever be with someone who didn't want me , Thank you for your wonderful thoughts.

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

Good word choices and easy
flow make this a pleasant
read even though it is
about jealousy. You give us
a clearly defined picture of
the emotion and the outcome
of such feelings. Well done,
good luck with your contest...Lora

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

I remember feeling this way when I was young. Now I wouldn't ever be with someone who didn't want me , Thank you so much for your words.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello,

You are so right. When my man looks at another woman it does bother me. He is going to look because he is a man, but now when I am around.

I love your presentation. That emerald green font with the black background color really stands out. The picture is stunning!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Thank you, I remember these feelings when I was young. Now I would never want to be with someone who didn't want to be with me.

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

Are you attempting to be facetious with your "jealousy" poem here? If so, it might be working somewhat? But you need to make your case stronger and passionately without inhibitions. Tony

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

thank you , actually I was depicting someone who is jealous but pretends not to be but I understand you point.

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

I"m sure if an ex has moved on with someone else there is going to be some sort of pain,and maybe a little jealousy. Well, I guess you would feel jealous if you feel that person has better looks, etc. Of course when we see them with someone else, we will feel some sort of way, but time heals wounds. I enjoyed reading your poem, it is well written. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Thank you , I remember feeling this when I was young. Now I would never want to be with someone who didn't want to be with me.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I like this poem because you make the speaker sympathetic. Yes, she is jealous of the woman who is with the man she loves, but she is not vindictive or cruel in any way. A novel approach to this poem.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

I remember feeling this way when I was young. Now I would never want someone who did not want me. The gift of age.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is very well written. The descriptive phrasiology is excellent Rhymes are smooth and even and the presentation very attractive.Great job.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. I remember when I was young feeling this way, no longer. I would never want someone who didn't want me.

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

This is a great poem and despite not wanting to be jealous, it is hard to do when faced with the truth. Lovely presentation and this should bring you rewards Good luck Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. I remember feeling when I was young. I would never want to be with someone who did not want to be with me.

reply by Chrissy710 on 24-Apr-2016

yes that the truth

Comment from winnona

Excellent

Your choice of artwork and background color complete your poem nicely. Your words are very well written and good strong words that flow together and convey the meaning of the poem to the reader.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. I really have no time for jealousy now, but I remember how it felt when I was young. I would never want someone who didn't want me.