Another Fix, Another Poem
Acrostic32 total reviews
Comment from lightink
You impressed the hell out of me with this! And I'm out of sixes :(!
The imagery is incredible! Blood injected... wow! And the flow comes!
The meter is very well designed! Those trochaic substitutions were the best, most dramatic places to break the iambic flow for a strong effect!
"T he truth is the most hateful foe of all"
Wow!
This is awesome, my friend!
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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You impressed the hell out of me with this! And I'm out of sixes :(!
The imagery is incredible! Blood injected... wow! And the flow comes!
The meter is very well designed! Those trochaic substitutions were the best, most dramatic places to break the iambic flow for a strong effect!
"T he truth is the most hateful foe of all"
Wow!
This is awesome, my friend!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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This was our potlatch challeng. I took, I forget, twenty minutes give or take. I'm amazed at what we've come up with in our challenges. Glad you liked this. Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from closetpoetjester
Yes indeed, the author is a constant prisoner of the pen and it doesn't seem to matter how much he might try, the will is too great to wean himself from the bleeding ink.
I liked your dramatic submission to the constant blur of lines between a poets delusional reality and fantasy world.
Super smooth iambics...and it was a solid read albeit a bloodfest haha
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Yes indeed, the author is a constant prisoner of the pen and it doesn't seem to matter how much he might try, the will is too great to wean himself from the bleeding ink.
I liked your dramatic submission to the constant blur of lines between a poets delusional reality and fantasy world.
Super smooth iambics...and it was a solid read albeit a bloodfest haha
P
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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It just looks cool in red, yes? This is from the Saturday Potlatch challenge. We all had the same acrostic and had to write it under the timer. I was surprised I came up with this. LOL. Pretty dark, eh? I'm glad you liked this, I kinda liked it too. Thanks a million, mikey
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Yes very dark. So dark I nearly didn't spot it haha
Kidding.
Very good potlatching, mikey.
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
You write so well, and explain your tortured existence so well, as a writer who needs to write. The topic surely brought out the best in you. I am amazed that you can write this in just ten minutes. It must be oozing inside of you waiting for an outlet; your writing ability, I mean. I am sorry for your anguish. But, in exchange, we have a very creative writer in you. The rhyme scheme; the flow and meter; the subject matter; all are exemplary. Thank you for sharing the depth of your soul with us.
Peace, Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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You write so well, and explain your tortured existence so well, as a writer who needs to write. The topic surely brought out the best in you. I am amazed that you can write this in just ten minutes. It must be oozing inside of you waiting for an outlet; your writing ability, I mean. I am sorry for your anguish. But, in exchange, we have a very creative writer in you. The rhyme scheme; the flow and meter; the subject matter; all are exemplary. Thank you for sharing the depth of your soul with us.
Peace, Jesse
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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There's something about the challenge that brings out a different side of all of us when we take it on. I actually didn't even know what this was about until after I wrote it and posted it. THEN I read it and saw, oh, not bad. The whole speed writing triggers a different part of the brain I guess. It's pretty cool and a lot of fun really. I'm delighted you liked this. WOW. Some awesome words to read. I hope you'll join us this coming Saturday. Remember, we're sworn to niceness. LOL Thanks for the great review, mikey
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I'll try to join you guys on this coming Saturday. Last weekend I got caught up in long conversations with friends and family members about the death of my brother's daughter. I didn't have much time for myself, but that's okay, I'm glad I can be there for those close to me in times of grief. Anyway, thanks for the invite, and I'll try to participate next time.
Jesse
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No problem. I'm so sorry for your loss. Glad you could be there.
Hopefully next week. :))
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Thanks for caring. Yes, hopefully next week.
Jesse
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, I don't know how you guys write these so fast...but this is really a great poem...you can feel your pain in it...it just pulls you in sweet boy...so very well written...and I think the picture is perfect...well done you...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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HI Michael, I don't know how you guys write these so fast...but this is really a great poem...you can feel your pain in it...it just pulls you in sweet boy...so very well written...and I think the picture is perfect...well done you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Hi, Her Majesty, Queen of Sweetsmondavia, Ruler of All That's is Sugary Goodness Throughout Europe.
It's all in the forcing ourselves to really write as fast as possible WiTHOUT thinking. I didn't even know what I'd written until AFTER I'd posted it and read it finally. I'm so glad you liked it. It's the greatest fun to write in this terrifying way. LOL. mikey
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LMAO You...I hope one day Michael to get back to my writing...my mind needs so time...my life will have to settle someday...and I see it coming...thank you...you truly do make me smile...you are a great guy...and so welcome...lol...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Dawn Munro
Um, what's happening? I am absolutely sure I wrote a review for another acrostic that also spelled out "Writing Addict". That is supposed to be the title of the poem. Er...I just read your notes, and I guess whoever organized this week's challenge forgot that an acrostic is supposed to spell out the TITLE of the poem using the first letter of each line...
Anyway, I liked what you wrote. (*scratches head* *smiles* * runs away quickly, as headache is beginning...*)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Um, what's happening? I am absolutely sure I wrote a review for another acrostic that also spelled out "Writing Addict". That is supposed to be the title of the poem. Er...I just read your notes, and I guess whoever organized this week's challenge forgot that an acrostic is supposed to spell out the TITLE of the poem using the first letter of each line...
Anyway, I liked what you wrote. (*scratches head* *smiles* * runs away quickly, as headache is beginning...*)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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I never use the acrostic as the title unless they make me. HAHAHA! They have to say it's a rule or I run wild in the streets. They usually leave that rule out or put, "The title is "USUALLY" the spelled out word". They should no I'm not "usual". LOL
Well, I'm pleased you liked it anyway even if I am a rebel and a wild radical. :)) mikey
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LOL. Uh, yeah, okay, I'll buy it. (For a coupla cents.) Hahahaha!
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Cool, at my income level that will help. ;))
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Aaaaahahaha - at mine, I have to break the piggy open...and rob his kids...
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I'll just make this a "no charge" introductory special! I'm a bleeding heart liberal after all. :))
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Great! Now ya tell me after I broke poor Porky's back! Well, at least you saved his kid for the other cent...(LOL)
Comment from seaglass
I am definitely a writing addict. All the endorphins flow full force when I finish a piece. A bit like a runner's high. Your poem describes it well.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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I am definitely a writing addict. All the endorphins flow full force when I finish a piece. A bit like a runner's high. Your poem describes it well.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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It was right off the top of my head and I think I did key into the inner feelings of it. Glad to hear it was accurate. A fun challenge and a surprise when I was done and read this. mikey
Comment from Pantygynt
Dark stuff this, Mikey. Looks like you've got it bad. Nothing left but cold turkey I fear and the withdrawal symptoms are horrendous, stifled sonnets, torn up triolets and viral villanelles. This one was pretty good though and excellent presentation.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Dark stuff this, Mikey. Looks like you've got it bad. Nothing left but cold turkey I fear and the withdrawal symptoms are horrendous, stifled sonnets, torn up triolets and viral villanelles. This one was pretty good though and excellent presentation.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Hey, PG. Quite a few of these challenge things came out dark. I just write and usually I'm surprised at the results. I think it's a blast actually. Glad you liked this one. I kinda did to when I finally read it AFTER I posted it. HAHAHA! mikey
Comment from Ric Myworld
A writing addict: experiencing the world and all it's wicked ways from the tip of a pen. Little Tommy nerd sits at his desk looking through his wire-rimmed glasses, loosening is polka-dot bow tie, as he sticks it in . . . overdrive that is, living life on the edge, sex, drugs, and rock-n-roll. "Take a trip on the wild side." Maybe stoned, but never far from the comforts of home. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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A writing addict: experiencing the world and all it's wicked ways from the tip of a pen. Little Tommy nerd sits at his desk looking through his wire-rimmed glasses, loosening is polka-dot bow tie, as he sticks it in . . . overdrive that is, living life on the edge, sex, drugs, and rock-n-roll. "Take a trip on the wild side." Maybe stoned, but never far from the comforts of home. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Hey, Ric
Good to see you, my friend. Add charmed, can't forget luck. I'm just lucky. Love your take on this. Yep, you've got it down to a tee. And the saga continues as I deny age and whatever else Earth throws at me. Party on! mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
One of your very best, Mr. Cahill. Rather scary almost, but I guess that was your purpose. This challenge thing seems to bring out some really different results from you. I like it. NG
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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One of your very best, Mr. Cahill. Rather scary almost, but I guess that was your purpose. This challenge thing seems to bring out some really different results from you. I like it. NG
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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YES! It does, doesn't it? It's kind of cool and the greatest way to write. I swear I think I prefer it. I think this mindless brain works better than my regular brain. Maybe I should just shut the main one off, yes? HAHAHA! mikey
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
There you are!
I was thinking I had lost you to the romantic world forever but there is a great piece of you left.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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There you are!
I was thinking I had lost you to the romantic world forever but there is a great piece of you left.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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See what comes out when I'm not thinking about it. HAHAHA! Yep, this is always lurking under the surface. Thanks so much. Glad you could make it. It's not a party without Barb!! mikey
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aaaaahhhhh family
