Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

Wonderful storytelling in attractive and well cadenced rhymed verse, which makes it more attractive to the young reader, who I hope will take Wally advice.
Reg

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Thank you. I hope so, too. I appreciate your comments very much. 8-)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

It's good to knowcthe rules of the road when you are riding a bike. Wally went to the forest thicket to paint hus next masterpiece. He seems not to get tired of trying to paint a master piece.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Well, he's not to bright, I guess, but he never gives up. LOL

Thank you for reviewing this. I appreciate your comments. 8-)

Comment from MelB

Excellent

This might be my favorite one yet. I can picture him ringing that bell on his bike. If he keeps working, I think he will paint that masterpiece yet. This one flows very smoothly. The rhyme is great.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. I appreciate your very nice comments.

Yes, he loves that bell! LOL

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

Wally is a very busy and eager weasel and I respect him very much for his willingness to go out and get what is necessary in life to do what is right! Excellent creative write! Have a wonderful, writing day! Tony

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

You, too. Thank you for reading this. I know you don't really like the silly stuff, but I appreciate you reviewing it. 8-)


Have a good weekend.

reply by tony bronk on 23-Apr-2016

I never said that I don't like reading "good" silly stuff. I "corrected" myself. I really do like Wally...really! He's cute, charming, silly and creative. Please keep Wally going! I will keep reading and keeping up with his adventures! Tony

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Thank you. I didn't mean it that way. Please forgive me. I meant that it was flattering that you review me . Shut my mouth! LOL

I'm happy you like Wally. From what everyone tells me, he'll be around for a while.

I hope you're having a great weekend. It's sunny and perfect temp here in Arkansas today. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 25-Apr-2016

Thank you. I didn't mean it that way. Please forgive me. I meant that it was flattering that you review me . Shut my mouth! LOL

I'm happy you like Wally. From what everyone tells me, he'll be around for a while.

I hope you're having a great weekend. It's sunny and perfect temp here in Arkansas today. 8-)

Comment from Lancer1979

Excellent

Delightful as always, Yvonne, and with a subtle but important lesson within the words. I think I need to adopt to the last stanza to my own life.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Thank you very much. You've been such a support for me. I really appreciate your interest, my friend. 8-)

reply by Lancer1979 on 23-Apr-2016

You're welcome! Have a nice weekend.

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Yvonne,

You've done it again! This is really an enjoyable read and it conveys
so many good qualities about character (keep trying) and responsibility
with riding a bike and learning the right rules and not entering into
dangerous games.

He is so cute, creative and fun. Your flow is really smooth and your
rhymes work well. I'm looking forward to his next adventure.

Linda

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

The reviews haven't been as forthcoming this time. I think it's time to retire Wally, don't you?

Thank you for a lovely and in-depth review. You know I always appreciate your input. 8-)

reply by AnnaLinda on 23-Apr-2016

No, that's not it. Probably everybody is watching Prince stuff. Your poem will be up for a couple more days...People will come by...

Do Not...I repeat...DO NOT RETIRE WALLY

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Okay. I hear you. Hmph! LOL

Thanks. I hadn't thought of the Prince craze. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 25-Apr-2016

Okay. I hear you. Hmph! LOL

Thanks. I hadn't thought of the Prince craze. 8-)

Comment from Zarak64

Excellent

I like it a lot! Your drawing to fantastic! You are quite an amazing artist. My only concern is that choosing a bright Orange background puts stress on your eyes so next time, a paler colour will be good. Other wise, I love it!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. I'm happy you like it. I've thought about another color, but several people have said they like the one I have. I'll think about it.

I'm not an artist, I'm sorry to say. Wally is the result of a Google search for a weasel. However, I'm working with someone now to give me fresh sketches. The only thing I've done is to add to the pictures. 8-)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi DaMommy

I just love the poem you write about Wally. You do such a great job in writing it and I always enjoy reading it and finding out what's going to happy next in his life. Bravo!

Kat

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. You've been a huge support to me. I appreciate it so much. 8-)

Comment from Marykelly

Excellent

Wally is the kind of boy every parent wants to trust on a bike. He gets the idea that the bike is transportation that gets him safely from one place to another and willingly follows the rules of the road. This attitude gives Wally the freedom to roam on his bike and indulge his painting.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Yes, I've raised him well. LOL Thank you for your comments. I'm happy you like reading about Wally. 8-)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Another good Wally story. I hope you are considering publishing these. They really are good, my friend. I am glad you kept writing them

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Thank you. Yes, I think Wally has a lot to do yet. He's a very young weasel, you know, and has lot of adventures yet.

Yes, I'm looking at Kindle Direct Publishing now. It just takes me to get up courage to DO IT.

Thank you, dear friend, for being such a support. Without you and SweetLinda, I probably wouldn't have stayed when I first came onsite. I felt so lost. I'll never forget you for that alone. 8-)

reply by Douglas Paul on 22-Apr-2016

I appreciate that. You are a better writer than most I think. Look at CreateSpace too

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Oooooo, I will. Thanks. 8-)

reply by Douglas Paul on 22-Apr-2016

I think I am going to use them for my next book - e can help each other through it

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

That would be great! Thank you. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 24-Apr-2016

That would be great! Thank you. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 24-Apr-2016

Oooooo, I will. Thanks. 8-)