Comment from Lulube

Excellent

Short and to the point. Don't beat around the bush looking for those polite words to describe what is in the nose. just say it like it is. lol too funny, the poem is the twin of the photo. great job

so where yee's at? one week left. oh boy

lulube

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

LMAO Tahlia has shoved sultanas up there and I reckon Jackson may have put a Smartie up his at some point when he was tiny.
Look I think when it comes to a child, if they find a hole, they then go about trying to locate the bottom and I'm sure many a child would beg to differ on the "fingers" thingy haha
Dirty little wretches. A cute little unsavoury offering from your nib. Boy you must have daily inspiration from these little darlings. Mine are permanent fodder for poems.
Hugs P
x

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Oh my goodness That must have been a scary thing for everyone specially the child.
I pray everything came out well....LOL
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

Comment from lightink

Excellent

Oh no! These days seem pretty hard at your work!
I enjoyed this educational :) poem with fun anapestic meter!
I hope the little one is doing okay!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a very true and good write, Debra. I did the exact same thing as a kid with cherry pits. Luckily my mother had me blow my nose and they came out. Your little student, I guess, wasn't as lucky. Good rhyming, good topic, good teaching lesion. Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Perfect and a neat rhyme for little ones to remind them not to do this.
My twins were great for this. One time, one put a lego up his nose and we took forever to get out. Ten minutes later, his brother did the same

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Well, there you have it, Debra--a poem inspired from you day at work.

Good job with the rhyme and picture.

I look forward to the next poem about your school kids.

Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

Comment from JennaG

Exceptional

Thanks for bringing me a smile, Debra! It's been a long, strange week and I needed a chuckle. This poem is so well written and very funny. I admire you so much for taking on NaPoWriMo and coming up with such clever ideas and topics each day. Sorry I haven't reviewed more of them. Sounds like you've had an interesting day at work. lol. :) Thanks for sharing this. Loved it! :)

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow

Excellent

LOL, that's cute. Couple of thoughts for you

Everyone knows that the holes in our nose
are just there for bogeys and snot.(I think bogeys should be boogies or boogey or something with that oo sound)
They're not meant for fingers, or buttons, or beads,
or anything else, no they're not!( I would period after else and cap No to give it more bang)

Great little children's poem. I think I did that when I was a kid and had to have doctor's get it out. UGHHHH did I just admit that?

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Debra, this is a delightful. poem that I am sure little boys would love to memorize to make little girls go, Yuk! I enjoyed reading and had to laugh. Patricia

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016