Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "There's Been an Accident"NaPoWriMo April 2016
13 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
I'm sure your muse will be fine by the time I get around to reviewing this. It's an interesting thought. Muses often meet brick walls! Evi
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I'm sure your muse will be fine by the time I get around to reviewing this. It's an interesting thought. Muses often meet brick walls! Evi
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Your muse is in big trouble it sounds like, my friend. I hope some help arrives soon. Maybe CPR would help. Good luck getting the needed help~Debbie
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Your muse is in big trouble it sounds like, my friend. I hope some help arrives soon. Maybe CPR would help. Good luck getting the needed help~Debbie
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
Comment from MacMhuirich
muse battered and bruised - but still alive, don't you just hate those brick walls. Love this simple poem, good wording radiates your frustration on hitting the wall.
Thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John
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muse battered and bruised - but still alive, don't you just hate those brick walls. Love this simple poem, good wording radiates your frustration on hitting the wall.
Thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
Comment from closetpoetjester
LOL Well for Gods sake you can have some of mine then mate...I just DON'T have time to get it all down.
I swear I could fuckin explode some days LMAO
Between brick walls and bruised muses I hope you are hanging in there. You got a great poem, Miss Train Wreck!
Toot, toot, friggin toot!
Hugs P
xo
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LOL Well for Gods sake you can have some of mine then mate...I just DON'T have time to get it all down.
I swear I could fuckin explode some days LMAO
Between brick walls and bruised muses I hope you are hanging in there. You got a great poem, Miss Train Wreck!
Toot, toot, friggin toot!
Hugs P
xo
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
Comment from misscookie
Well this was a pleasant and funny surprise.
From the title I was ready for the worst.
Thank you for sharing this very witty poem.
I still can't stop laughing.
Cookie
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Well this was a pleasant and funny surprise.
From the title I was ready for the worst.
Thank you for sharing this very witty poem.
I still can't stop laughing.
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
Comment from lightink
That's a really good metaphor for writer's block! Except when you write something so imaginative, no on will believe that you may be struggling with it :)!
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That's a really good metaphor for writer's block! Except when you write something so imaginative, no on will believe that you may be struggling with it :)!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
LOL, who of can not relate to this one.
There are times when my imagination just can't imagine
and my muse feels abused..
Well done,
Was a pleasure to read..
:-) Carolyn
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LOL, who of can not relate to this one.
There are times when my imagination just can't imagine
and my muse feels abused..
Well done,
Was a pleasure to read..
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem says so much in such a small space.
Hang in there, and your muse will come back to you.
Write some more about your kiddos at school.
Good job and take care. Jan
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Your poem says so much in such a small space.
Hang in there, and your muse will come back to you.
Write some more about your kiddos at school.
Good job and take care. Jan
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
Comment from I am Cat
MEDIC! I'm on the way with bandages! ;)
and a shovel... we always need a shovel to shovel up the
leftovers. ;)
I got your back, ;) LOL
this was cute... mwah
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MEDIC! I'm on the way with bandages! ;)
and a shovel... we always need a shovel to shovel up the
leftovers. ;)
I got your back, ;) LOL
this was cute... mwah
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
Comment from Leineco
This is probably the best poetic
A r r g h..
I have seen!
Poor bruised muse...poor frustrated poet.
(maybe a glass of wine or two will help in the recovery ;-)
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This is probably the best poetic
A r r g h..
I have seen!
Poor bruised muse...poor frustrated poet.
(maybe a glass of wine or two will help in the recovery ;-)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
