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Comment from P1
this is just breath taking
i swear i was nearly in tears reading
this coz any one of my own kids could
have written me a similar letter. you
wrote it tastefully and emotionally and
finished with hope. thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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this is just breath taking
i swear i was nearly in tears reading
this coz any one of my own kids could
have written me a similar letter. you
wrote it tastefully and emotionally and
finished with hope. thank you for sharing
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. The world is wonderful now.
Comment from Senyai
This is such an emotional piece of poetry. I only hope you find comfort in the best of memories and hold tight to those. We all are only here for a little while before we journey onward. Your well written words remind us to cherish those we love. Best of you in the contest.
Take care,
Senyai
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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This is such an emotional piece of poetry. I only hope you find comfort in the best of memories and hold tight to those. We all are only here for a little while before we journey onward. Your well written words remind us to cherish those we love. Best of you in the contest.
Take care,
Senyai
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. Life is wonderful now.
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Great!
Comment from Alan K Pease
This is an absolutely gorgeous poem inviting the reader to savor the brilliance of a search for a wealth of experience in a rainbow contrasted to the fears and experience with life of a child rounding his growth into an adult. My only regret is that I am out of sixes. I am sorry for your loss. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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This is an absolutely gorgeous poem inviting the reader to savor the brilliance of a search for a wealth of experience in a rainbow contrasted to the fears and experience with life of a child rounding his growth into an adult. My only regret is that I am out of sixes. I am sorry for your loss. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. Life was hard back then but it is wonderful now
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
It is so true you can only see and find the gold at the end of the rainbow after the wildest storms have passed away, when the sun starts to shine again.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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It is so true you can only see and find the gold at the end of the rainbow after the wildest storms have passed away, when the sun starts to shine again.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much , that is so true
Comment from Pantygynt
After an opening that is stark and brutal, a tale of storms, the rainbow appears and is analysed as the bow of forgiveness with a new life awaiting at its end that is the true pot of gold even if it is not the sort you can pay into the bank.
Lovely descriptive free verse here.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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After an opening that is stark and brutal, a tale of storms, the rainbow appears and is analysed as the bow of forgiveness with a new life awaiting at its end that is the true pot of gold even if it is not the sort you can pay into the bank.
Lovely descriptive free verse here.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Thank you for listening. I love that you understand this.
Comment from Bill O'Bier
I'm very sorry for your loss. Writing helps me express me feeling and it seems to have done this for you. You have an excellent use of words and a smooth flow. The arrangement is creative and the words well chosen. Thanks for sharing this very well composed piece.
Wishing you the best,
Bill
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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I'm very sorry for your loss. Writing helps me express me feeling and it seems to have done this for you. You have an excellent use of words and a smooth flow. The arrangement is creative and the words well chosen. Thanks for sharing this very well composed piece.
Wishing you the best,
Bill
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. We have to share in order to heal.
Comment from William Ross
very good, nicely done, sometimes I think the rainbow is a sign from God saying he's sorry for the storms destruction it brings, Like look at the beauty I just gave you.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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very good, nicely done, sometimes I think the rainbow is a sign from God saying he's sorry for the storms destruction it brings, Like look at the beauty I just gave you.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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I know it is a sign. One that I will believe in . Thank you for stating it so beautiful.
Comment from scd41
Life's trials and tribulations - its pains and sufferings finally ending with joy have been imaginatively likened to the appearance of rainbow after a storm. I liked the way you have built the nice imagery of the seven colors of rainbow showing up one after another.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Life's trials and tribulations - its pains and sufferings finally ending with joy have been imaginatively likened to the appearance of rainbow after a storm. I liked the way you have built the nice imagery of the seven colors of rainbow showing up one after another.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. Life is wonderful now.
Comment from dmt1967
This poem brought a tear to my eye and takes me back to my childhood. Forgiving someone is more for the victim and you were both victims. Hate destroys one, I speak from experience. Thank you for sharing.
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This poem brought a tear to my eye and takes me back to my childhood. Forgiving someone is more for the victim and you were both victims. Hate destroys one, I speak from experience. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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I usually don't let life get to me, but the poem my son wrote was so beautiful and painful and it sent me back to those times. You said you speak from experience and that scares me. I hope you have also healed. Life is wonderful now, but every now and then I fall back into that chasm and have to fight my way back up. thank you so much for listening.
Comment from DR DIP
A beautiful read with a lot of despair and emotion throughout sad to hear of your stepson. Very poignant poem indeed thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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A beautiful read with a lot of despair and emotion throughout sad to hear of your stepson. Very poignant poem indeed thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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I usually don't let life get to me, but the poem my son wrote was so beautiful and painful and it sent me back to those times. . Life is wonderful now, but every now and then I fall back into that chasm and have to fight my way back up. thank you so much for listening.
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my pleasure and glad you are great now
