Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Getting a bike is definitely a big improvement in anybody's life. Now wally can get quicker to his destination and he don't have to carry all his gear around.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

That's true. He can farther afield.

Thank you for your review. 8-)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This rolls along splendidly, another instalment in Wally's life story. I am sure the kids will get a lot of enjoyement and indeed poetic education here. The meter is quite complex here so well done fgor stretching the little darlings a bit this time.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Thank you for a lovely review. I appreciate it so much. I hope you're having a great weekend. 8-)

Comment from VaV-VOOM

Excellent

Nice poem, I really enjoyed reviewing it, and I really like the picture too. Thank you so much for taking the time to sharing with the world. my favorite part is the 4th stanza, cool. Write On! VaV-VOOM!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Thank you so much for a nice review. I appreciate your comments very much. 8-)

reply by VaV-VOOM on 23-Apr-2016

Your so welcome, VaV-VOOM!

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Just love these wally the Weasel poems you put together great job, this is a fun book for children. great idea and work on this. have a good day

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Thank you. I appreciate your comments. Let me know if you get tired of Wally. 8-)

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Great little children's poem damommy could see this in a children's poetry book
quirky little rhyme pattern. thoroughly enjoyed it. thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Thank you for taking the time to read and review it. I'm so glad you like it. 8-)

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

We have a lot of woodland critters finding their way onto this site lol. I really love these poems about or written by our animal friends. They are all rather good. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Thank you for a very nice review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 8-)

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

A very cute, charming, witty story poem that I enjoyed reading very, very much! It' was a fun ride to read and a good write on your part. Have a wonderful write! Tony

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Thank you very much. What a gracious review you've given me. I'm so glad you liked it. 8-)

Comment from Lancer1979

Average

Thank you for sharing, Yvonne, and always putting a smile on my face. Our family lost a dear friend today. She was 89 years old and had been quite ill for the last couple years of her life. She was a Holocaust survivor and leaves her husband of 70 years, two sons, and countless grand children and great grandchildren. I'm sad.

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016

I'm so sorry for your loss. I just lost an uncle that I dearly loved. He was like a father. It comforts me to know he is healthy and happy in Heaven.

I know it's hard to lose a loved one, but we can't be sorry for where they are now.

Please feel free to talk to me any time. My email is yuzzell@sbcglobal.net. I mean it. Any time!

I will say a prayer for you and everyone who loved her. 8-)

reply by Lancer1979 on 22-Apr-2016

Thank you, Yvonne.

Comment from sage17611

Good

This is a cute fun poem to read, I like the rhyming theme, the verses flowed nicely, and the poem kept me interested to the end. Thanks for sharing this piece.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016

Thank you for taking the time to read it and review.

I'm so happy you like it. 8-)

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Another fun and enjoyable children's poem about Wally the Weasel and his bike. Very nice aabb rhyme, rhythm, and flow. Very good imagery.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Thank you. Do you think there should be more Wally? I don't want him to outstay his welcome. The truth, now. 8-)

reply by MelB on 20-Apr-2016

You're welcome. I enjoy the Wally poems.