Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Marijke,

That was a true honor to be asked to write something by your sister-in-law in the loss of her brother. You stepped up with a very well written rhyming piece and considering what you mentioned in your notes, is very appropriate.

I send my condolences to you and your family,

Linda

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016

Hi Linda. Thanks for that warm and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Khamelink

Good

I thought the rhyme was great. I would add some punctuation after the sentences though. It would help with the flow a little bit. Great writing though.

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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016

Hi Khamelink Thanks for your comments and review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very sweet but sad poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Easy to read and review. Teri

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016

Hi Teri. Thanks for that warm and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Words filled with warmth that are
spoken from a heart that is broken
and eyes filled with tears reminiscing
of the love that a sister held for her
big brother; words that are artistically
and poetically whispered

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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016

Hi fastdigits. Thanks for that warm and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)