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The Daredevil Girls From Bunker Hil

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A fantasy novel about good fighting evil.

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Comment from Douglas Paul
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I like this chapter, Nancy. Sounds like all the girls are active inside the mansion now. I especially liked the introduction of the friendly ghost to help them out. This is a good story

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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
    Thank you, Douglas. I kept it shorter this time!
reply by Douglas Paul on 19-Apr-2016
    I noticed that it was shorter than usual
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
    I had several readers complain...