Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Linda, what a sweet picture of the little girl and butterfly.
I don't know much about a limerick, but this is cute just the
thought of the little girl and butterfly.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

Hey Jude, thank you for a great review...I am just leaning the form...it's kind of fun...thank you...Love Linda xxoo

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

That is an adorable picture :) You got the names into your poem, and there is an interaction with a human and insect. Maybe it's just me, but I couldn't get the limerick meter to work. However, this potlatch group is encouraging us to try new forms without worries. Nice to see you participating.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

HI Joy, I changed it a bit...I do know what you are saying...thank you for the help...and for a great review...love Linda xxoo

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

This is a nice poem, it flows nicely, and is very well written. I like the pictorial depiction of the poem, it's descriptive, colorful, and happy. Good use of rhyming verses in this poem.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

HI Sage, thank you so very much for a great review...so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

Hi, Linda
YAY! Thanks soooooo much for joining in. SEEEEE? Aren't we fun? This is darling and sweet. Very uplifting and Spring all around feelings. Makes me want to run in a meadow, well, perhaps stroll. :)) Loved it!!! mikey

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

Hi Michael, you go running in a meadow...I want pictures...LOL...thank you for your so awesome review you...always make me smile...big...love xxoo Linda

Comment from candyfink

Excellent

It brought a smile to my face by reminding me of my daughter's personality. It is a lovely spring poem. It will get the reader excited for spring.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

Hi Candy, thank you so much for a great review...she reminded me of my granddaughter...thank you...xxoo Linda

Comment from zlp22

Excellent

Great picture that goes perfect with the poem. Very happy and uplifting words that flow from one word to another, the yellow color is just right

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

Hi Zip, thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Hey, girl!

I don't know about you, but writing limericks is not an easy thing for me! *smile* But I enjoyed your fun poem about a tiny girl going flying with a butterfly friend. *smile* Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

HI Robyn, thank you so much for a great review sweet girl...I'm still new at it...LOL...and I write them faster than I do most of the time...LOL...glad you like it...love ya Linda xxoo

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Precious and a fun read. I didn't get to do the challenge on Saturday. I was at a birthday party. Look forward to reading everything you all wrote. Thank you. Judy

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

HI Judy, thank you for a great review...and hope you had fun at the party...luff Linda xxoo

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. This is a very lovely poem with a lovely little girl to make it better. It is most well written and I enjoyed reading it. Good work.

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

Hi Pretty, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo