Beautiful Day
just a poem69 total reviews
Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
Hi L. Raven,
This is a really sparkly poem that makes for a pleasant read this lunchtime. I love the names you have used for the central characters which are very apt. Thanks for sharing this! R
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Hi L. Raven,
This is a really sparkly poem that makes for a pleasant read this lunchtime. I love the names you have used for the central characters which are very apt. Thanks for sharing this! R
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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HI Raoul, thank you so much for your wonderful stars...and a wonderful review...I hope you had a great lunch...so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from tfawcus
A charming trio of poems loosely based on the limerick form. Such innocence would melt the heart of anyone. Butterflies and little girls go well together!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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A charming trio of poems loosely based on the limerick form. Such innocence would melt the heart of anyone. Butterflies and little girls go well together!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Hi Tony, thank you so much for a great review sweetie...I am so glad you like it...I am still learning...and you are so right...butterflies and little girls go well together...thank you...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from scd41
The innocence expressed by the child Rose to a flying butterfly aptly named Star is as captivating as the accompanying picture which is fantastic. On the whole, the poem and the picture make a beautiful day for its readers.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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The innocence expressed by the child Rose to a flying butterfly aptly named Star is as captivating as the accompanying picture which is fantastic. On the whole, the poem and the picture make a beautiful day for its readers.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Hi scd, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...God Bless...xxoo Linda luff
Comment from William Ross
very good nicely done a butterfly named star great job on the limerick for this weeks Potlatch challenge. thanks for the share.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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very good nicely done a butterfly named star great job on the limerick for this weeks Potlatch challenge. thanks for the share.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Hi William, so good to see you...thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Kazzawin
What a lovely upbeat poem!
I have always loved butterflies so was immediately attracted to this because of the gorgeous photo that accompanies it. It conjures up those heady days as a child when you wished for things constantly like 'how I wish I could fly'. Yes, it sparked a pretty picture in my head of long ago times without worry or stress.
Absolutely charming!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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What a lovely upbeat poem!
I have always loved butterflies so was immediately attracted to this because of the gorgeous photo that accompanies it. It conjures up those heady days as a child when you wished for things constantly like 'how I wish I could fly'. Yes, it sparked a pretty picture in my head of long ago times without worry or stress.
Absolutely charming!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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HI Kazzan, yes it brings good memories for me as well...thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...thank you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Beautiful Day" is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this poet's work.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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"Beautiful Day" is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this poet's work.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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HI beautiful Duchess, thank you so very much sweet lady...I am still learning...thank you for a great review...so glad to see you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from DR DIP
Nice just feel I wanted to know what the game is.
Limerick poetry is fun to do and you have done a good job. Thanks for sharing with us
dip
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Nice just feel I wanted to know what the game is.
Limerick poetry is fun to do and you have done a good job. Thanks for sharing with us
dip
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Hi Dip, thank you so very much...I am still leaning...give me a year...or two...LOL...thank you for a great review...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from rhymelord
A lovely poem. Light, refreshing and delightfully child like, but I cannot see how it can fit the mould of a limerick's metre.
Regards
Reg
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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A lovely poem. Light, refreshing and delightfully child like, but I cannot see how it can fit the mould of a limerick's metre.
Regards
Reg
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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HI Reg, it is my second shot a it...my teacher (I am Cat) just enlightened me of me mistakes...LOL...thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Eric1
Hi Linda, this is a really good set of stacking Limericks that read very well, excellent use of description and imagery to accompany a beautiful picture my friend.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Hi Linda, this is a really good set of stacking Limericks that read very well, excellent use of description and imagery to accompany a beautiful picture my friend.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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HI Eric, thank you so much sweetie for a great review...I am so glad you like it...God Bless my friend...Love Linda xxoo luff
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Beautiful imagery to accompany this sweet poem about nature and childhood, no better combination or subject matter for writing, in my opinion. Presentation on the yellow background was also very pleasing. The story unfolding between a 'conversation' of the two subjects was very sweet.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Beautiful imagery to accompany this sweet poem about nature and childhood, no better combination or subject matter for writing, in my opinion. Presentation on the yellow background was also very pleasing. The story unfolding between a 'conversation' of the two subjects was very sweet.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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HI Mary, thank you so much for a wonderful review ...I am so glad you like it...thank you...Love Linda xxoo
