Beautiful Day
just a poem69 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Linda,
I have to tell you that this is such a refreshing piece!
From your gorgeous presentation to the innocence, purity
and rhyme...this just blooms with beauty!
Love this. I give you a lot of credit to try this form. It is
challenging with multiple stanzas...I know, because I
tried and quit. I read this when you first put it out and
it seems you have improved upon its meter since then.
Wow, I'm impressed and very touched by your poem.
Linda
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Linda,
I have to tell you that this is such a refreshing piece!
From your gorgeous presentation to the innocence, purity
and rhyme...this just blooms with beauty!
Love this. I give you a lot of credit to try this form. It is
challenging with multiple stanzas...I know, because I
tried and quit. I read this when you first put it out and
it seems you have improved upon its meter since then.
Wow, I'm impressed and very touched by your poem.
Linda
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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HI Sweet Angel, I am still trying on the form...but I wrote another...thank you my sweet friend for alllllll your so wonderful stars...SO BIG HUGS...I love your review...smiling SO big...thank you Linda xxoo love
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Nice and I can see a little book made of this.
Pictures and expand on the piece.
My granddaughter loves butterflies and she would love this one.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
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Nice and I can see a little book made of this.
Pictures and expand on the piece.
My granddaughter loves butterflies and she would love this one.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
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Hi Barb, thank you for a wonderful review...my granddaughter loves them as well...so glad you like it sweet lady...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Gloria ....
What a beautiful picture for your poem, Linda. You always find the sweetest artwork and this is no exception.
A lovely message, a lovely poem from an amazing woman.
Love you lots!
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
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What a beautiful picture for your poem, Linda. You always find the sweetest artwork and this is no exception.
A lovely message, a lovely poem from an amazing woman.
Love you lots!
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
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HI Sweeter Than Sweet, I had it as my weekly Limerick...but I failed at writing it...OK!!!a whole new day sweets...I think I have a grip on it now...LOL...I'm going to try again...I may be late...but I usually am...LOL...thank you for allllll your wonderful stars sweet lady...and a so wonderful review...love ya lots too...I cherish our friendship...thank you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Dean Kuch
Spoken through the eyes of innocence, those of of small child and the delicate, dainty butterfly outfitted with glistening gossamer wings.
Splendid, Linda, very nicely done.
~Dean
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
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Spoken through the eyes of innocence, those of of small child and the delicate, dainty butterfly outfitted with glistening gossamer wings.
Splendid, Linda, very nicely done.
~Dean
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
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OH Dean, smiling sooooo big my friend...thank you for a wonderful review...you are something else...and I mean that in a good way...I love the picture...thank you...you...love Linda xxoo
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You are more than welcome, Linda.
Good luck.;)
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smiling back at ya...xxoo goodnight...turning in...you have sweet dreams...sleep tight...
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G'night.
Comment from GWinterwin
Very good poem with a beautiful message. A little one talking to a butterfly, wondering in her mind what it would be like to be able to fly. The thoughts of little ones are so very beautiful, and innocent.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Very good poem with a beautiful message. A little one talking to a butterfly, wondering in her mind what it would be like to be able to fly. The thoughts of little ones are so very beautiful, and innocent.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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HI George...I wrote as a Limerick...but it didn't have the right rhythm...I am going to try again...thank you so much for a wonderful review you...luff Linda xzxoo
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Linda. This is a gem from beginning to end. In fact the entire presentation is beautiful, including the little girl. How precious. I liked this stanza the best:
"Hi my friend, a beauty you are
to my friends, my name is Star
love to stop and talk awhile
thank you for the lovely smile
my journey here was very far."
Great poetry. Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
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Hi, Linda. This is a gem from beginning to end. In fact the entire presentation is beautiful, including the little girl. How precious. I liked this stanza the best:
"Hi my friend, a beauty you are
to my friends, my name is Star
love to stop and talk awhile
thank you for the lovely smile
my journey here was very far."
Great poetry. Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
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HI Bob, thank you so much for a great review...I am soooooo glad you like...I so love butterflies...thank you...xxoo Luff Linda
Comment from tony bronk
A very lovely, charming, witty, and "good feeling" poem that I enjoyed reading very much. I love butterflies, too! We in Wisconsin have Monarchs and Milkweeds to feed them. excellent write! Tony
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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A very lovely, charming, witty, and "good feeling" poem that I enjoyed reading very much. I love butterflies, too! We in Wisconsin have Monarchs and Milkweeds to feed them. excellent write! Tony
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Hi Tony, thank you so very much for a great review...I love them as well...I am so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Lannell912
This is a nice day bottled up into a poem loved it. I can see this on many walls atop desk or on the side of a coffee mug ! SIMPLY put its perfect keep up the good work YOUR friend LANNELL912
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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This is a nice day bottled up into a poem loved it. I can see this on many walls atop desk or on the side of a coffee mug ! SIMPLY put its perfect keep up the good work YOUR friend LANNELL912
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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HI Lannell, thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...thank you for your kind words...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from heatherpuig
Great work! I have an infatuation with butterfly's. Your poem really captured the innocence of childhood and the importance of play for me.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Great work! I have an infatuation with butterfly's. Your poem really captured the innocence of childhood and the importance of play for me.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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HI Heather, I love butterflies myself...I haven't seen as many now...as I did as a kid...sigh...thank you so much for your wonderful stars...and thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A very sweet poem about nature, and about a girl and a butterfly. It takes me back to my own childhood and imagination. That is what I feel is wonderful about this poem-its ability to take you to a safer and simpler time.
Rhonda
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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A very sweet poem about nature, and about a girl and a butterfly. It takes me back to my own childhood and imagination. That is what I feel is wonderful about this poem-its ability to take you to a safer and simpler time.
Rhonda
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Hi Rhonda, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
