Beautiful Day
just a poem69 total reviews
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello L. Raven,
Just A Poem, and indeed a lovely poem, having a cute butterfly with a cuter face beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is simple as well as perfectly matching the theme - a good quality.
Smooth and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with nice rhyming scheme.
The picture enhances beauty of the poem.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hello L. Raven,
Just A Poem, and indeed a lovely poem, having a cute butterfly with a cuter face beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is simple as well as perfectly matching the theme - a good quality.
Smooth and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with nice rhyming scheme.
The picture enhances beauty of the poem.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi RP, WOW!!! big smile my friend....thank you sooooooo much for allllll your wonderful stars you...and I love your review...thank you...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from c_lucas
A child's face radiated with happiness is well worth striving for. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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A child's face radiated with happiness is well worth striving for. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Charlie, thank you so much for a great review...so good to see you...so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from skyqueen19
An uplifting appreciation of nature and our interactions with it. It was wonderful to read a rhyming poem for a change!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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An uplifting appreciation of nature and our interactions with it. It was wonderful to read a rhyming poem for a change!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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HI Sky, thank you so much for a great review...so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from fastdigits
A delightful choice of art that is
then followed with beautifully
choreographed poetic phrases
that float as gracefully as a butterfly
as they float down the page.
Well done
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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A delightful choice of art that is
then followed with beautifully
choreographed poetic phrases
that float as gracefully as a butterfly
as they float down the page.
Well done
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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HI Fastdigits, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from nancyrabbrose
A very sweet poem. A butterfly is almost a poem in itself. The image of the child holding the butterfly is lovely. One criticism I have might be that the last stanza needs revision. Suddenly addressing the butterfly with a name takes away from the poem, rather than adding to it. I could be wrong, just one person's opinion.
All in all it is a good poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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A very sweet poem. A butterfly is almost a poem in itself. The image of the child holding the butterfly is lovely. One criticism I have might be that the last stanza needs revision. Suddenly addressing the butterfly with a name takes away from the poem, rather than adding to it. I could be wrong, just one person's opinion.
All in all it is a good poem. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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HI Nancy, thank you so very much for a great review...I will check it out...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from John Parkin
I loved the carefree style and flow of each line to the next. It was a feel good poem and a joy to read. I look forward to reading more of what you write.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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I loved the carefree style and flow of each line to the next. It was a feel good poem and a joy to read. I look forward to reading more of what you write.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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HI John, thank you so much for a great review...I am working on new forms...thank you...luff Linda xxoo
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Thank you so much. I write from the heart and my experiences and I try to educate and make people think and if I do that I am a success.
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smiling...xxoo
Comment from Kooky Clown
Loved the poem about a beautiful a butterfly. Butterfly's can and do bring a smile to people 's faces and your poem did just that for me too. Who doesn't see a butterfly and wish that they would stay around for a while and possibly want to fly off with them on a flight of fantasy. Hope you have more of the same for me to read.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Loved the poem about a beautiful a butterfly. Butterfly's can and do bring a smile to people 's faces and your poem did just that for me too. Who doesn't see a butterfly and wish that they would stay around for a while and possibly want to fly off with them on a flight of fantasy. Hope you have more of the same for me to read.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Kooky, I am trying to learn new forms...thank you so very much for a wonderful review...seems you don't see as many butterflies as there used to be...sigh...thank you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from LIJ Red
A child's viewpoint poem. Wasn't there a prompt? This would certainly meet it. Or is there some dark and devious symbology I missed here?
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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A child's viewpoint poem. Wasn't there a prompt? This would certainly meet it. Or is there some dark and devious symbology I missed here?
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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HI LlJ, no!!! I wrote it as a Limerick...wasn't quit right...LOL...next time...but I love the poem...so I kept it...LOL...thank you so much for a great review...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Dawn Munro
I think the thing I love best upon your sweet poem is that these are the moments to treasure, and you've captured the essence of that so beautifully, just reading this lifts my spirits! Wonderful choice of picture to adorn your uplifting words, too. :)
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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I think the thing I love best upon your sweet poem is that these are the moments to treasure, and you've captured the essence of that so beautifully, just reading this lifts my spirits! Wonderful choice of picture to adorn your uplifting words, too. :)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Sweetness, thank you sooooo much Dawn for a wonderful review you...I love the picture as well...so good to see you...I am so glad you like it...love ya Linda xxoo
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My pleasure - love you too, Linda. :)
Comment from Leineco
How could I pass up that adorable picture???
And my stopping was rewarded :-)
What a wonderful imaginary conversation
you have penned here! Butterfly and Child
meeting on a sunny day. . .exchanging
greetings and sharing a special moment :-)
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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How could I pass up that adorable picture???
And my stopping was rewarded :-)
What a wonderful imaginary conversation
you have penned here! Butterfly and Child
meeting on a sunny day. . .exchanging
greetings and sharing a special moment :-)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Leineco, thank you so much for a wonderful review...smiling big...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
