Beautiful Day
just a poem69 total reviews
Comment from Caressa_08
Beautiful poem with a wonderful photo displayed with that little girl holding that big butterfly... And hope to see some butterflies come outside to view in my butterfly/ hummingbird flowers to come up soon, maybe in about two weeks or less, planted awhile ago...Oh, too, my mom's name was Rose, you don't hear that name like you used too....Though her parents were from Bulgaria, and that is the national flower of that country, kind of think that is why they called her that, as too she was the only girl that lived who was born to them, and too was a redhead.....Quite a combination with red hair and being named a flower. My daughter's name is Wendy, and was born with my mom's hair color.
Thanks for sharing....Caressa_08
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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Beautiful poem with a wonderful photo displayed with that little girl holding that big butterfly... And hope to see some butterflies come outside to view in my butterfly/ hummingbird flowers to come up soon, maybe in about two weeks or less, planted awhile ago...Oh, too, my mom's name was Rose, you don't hear that name like you used too....Though her parents were from Bulgaria, and that is the national flower of that country, kind of think that is why they called her that, as too she was the only girl that lived who was born to them, and too was a redhead.....Quite a combination with red hair and being named a flower. My daughter's name is Wendy, and was born with my mom's hair color.
Thanks for sharing....Caressa_08
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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HI Caressa, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I don't see as many butterflies as I did years ago...sigh...yes I love the name Rose...and it is my favorite flower...thank you sweet girl...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Domino 2
Hi, Linda.
I think it's very nasty of the little girl in the picture to tempt sweet butterflies with her apparent innocence, and when they've landed, quickly and tightly clench her fist. Splat! That's SOME 'game'. Haha.
Seriously, a very cute interaction between the butterfly and cute little girl.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Hi, Linda.
I think it's very nasty of the little girl in the picture to tempt sweet butterflies with her apparent innocence, and when they've landed, quickly and tightly clench her fist. Splat! That's SOME 'game'. Haha.
Seriously, a very cute interaction between the butterfly and cute little girl.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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HI Ray, she doesn't look close to...Splat...just wanting to play...thank you so much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from RGstar
Lovely. I missed this one. What a nice summary write. A pleasure to read. Lifted my spirits.
Wishing you a great day.
Rgstar
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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Lovely. I missed this one. What a nice summary write. A pleasure to read. Lifted my spirits.
Wishing you a great day.
Rgstar
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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Hi Roy, how are you sweetie??? thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...take care...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from TallySally
Linda - Children never complicate things. I like that your poem seems to capture that and reads the way a little girl might speak out her thoughts. Purely. Simply. Enjoyed stepping into her shoes for a moment.
I have a passion for butterflies, dragonflies, tiddlywinks, lizzards and frogs - have passed that on to all my grandkids. Such fun!
Good write. Fine read.
God bless and my best,
Relda
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Linda - Children never complicate things. I like that your poem seems to capture that and reads the way a little girl might speak out her thoughts. Purely. Simply. Enjoyed stepping into her shoes for a moment.
I have a passion for butterflies, dragonflies, tiddlywinks, lizzards and frogs - have passed that on to all my grandkids. Such fun!
Good write. Fine read.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Sweet Girl, you are soooo sweet ...that is wonderful...I love butterflies too...my love for horses are what the kids and I have in common...thank you for a wonderful review my friend...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Taffspride
A fun poem, and a delightful interchange between a butterfly and little girl.
I enjoyed reading it aloud, especially since I had been watching a butterfly on the azalea outside my window.
Thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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A fun poem, and a delightful interchange between a butterfly and little girl.
I enjoyed reading it aloud, especially since I had been watching a butterfly on the azalea outside my window.
Thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Ann, so good to see you...I love the picture...and I love butterflies...don't see as many as I did years ago...sigh...thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...and you are so welcome....love Linda xxoo
Comment from Janet Foor
What a beautiful little girl with a beautiful smile as she holds the precious butterfly. A lovely poem - wish we could all stop and play a game with Rose.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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What a beautiful little girl with a beautiful smile as she holds the precious butterfly. A lovely poem - wish we could all stop and play a game with Rose.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Janet, so do I...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...have a wonderful evening...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from maryvellef
Warm, light and sunny as a beautiful day. And of course, it is as playful as its subject. The faux dialogue in some lines just made it the more childlike and teasing. I could just hear the butterfly talking to the little girl across a flowering shrubbery. The words use and the rhyme of the lines really put you in the mood of a child hour in a garden.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Warm, light and sunny as a beautiful day. And of course, it is as playful as its subject. The faux dialogue in some lines just made it the more childlike and teasing. I could just hear the butterfly talking to the little girl across a flowering shrubbery. The words use and the rhyme of the lines really put you in the mood of a child hour in a garden.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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HI Mary, thank you so very much...can you tell what needs improvement...that is a four star...thank you...Linda xxoo
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This perhaps is my personal taste but I would really have loved that the last line wouldn't be that stilted, abrupt and repetitive. It could be put like - but you'd leave me just the same .- And it wouldn't only rhyme with the first two lines but gives a playful air which goes well with the poem's general theme.
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thank you so much for the help...xxoo
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Beautiful in its simplicity. A Beautiful Day is a wonderful poem that reaches the child in us all. I love the presentation--the color yellow; the picture; the poem with its unique rhyme structure. The message is clear. Enjoy the day. I like how you wrote it as dialogue between the girl and the butterfly. Rose and Star are beautiful names. Thank you for an enjoyable read. You brightened up my day! Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Jesse
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Beautiful in its simplicity. A Beautiful Day is a wonderful poem that reaches the child in us all. I love the presentation--the color yellow; the picture; the poem with its unique rhyme structure. The message is clear. Enjoy the day. I like how you wrote it as dialogue between the girl and the butterfly. Rose and Star are beautiful names. Thank you for an enjoyable read. You brightened up my day! Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Jesse
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Jessie, I am so glad I was able to brighten up your day...thank you for a wonderful review...and you are so welcome....Luff Linda xxoo
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Hi Linda,
The feeling is mutual.
Jesse
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smiling xxoo
Comment from VaV-VOOM
Nice poetry, I really enjoyed that. The flow was nice and smooth; the first stanza was my favorite. Thank you for the sharing. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Nice poetry, I really enjoyed that. The flow was nice and smooth; the first stanza was my favorite. Thank you for the sharing. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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HI VaV-Voom, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo
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Your so welcome, VaV-VOOM!
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Linda sweets
Seems I missed this one! What a delightful poem with two fun characters. Lovely presentation. I don't think there is a poet who doesn't like butterfly poems.:)) This is a perfect children's poem, though adults can always enjoy so much as well. Great work dear gal. A beautiful day indeed. :))) Hugs - Lovi xoxoxo
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Hi Linda sweets
Seems I missed this one! What a delightful poem with two fun characters. Lovely presentation. I don't think there is a poet who doesn't like butterfly poems.:)) This is a perfect children's poem, though adults can always enjoy so much as well. Great work dear gal. A beautiful day indeed. :))) Hugs - Lovi xoxoxo
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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HI sweet girl, so glad to see you...I so love butterflies...even though there doesn't seem to be as many as there were when we were kids...sigh...thank you angel for a wonderful review...big smiles back at ya...love ya Linda xxoo
