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Wally Weasel's Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Wally Weasel Can't Decide"
He's not choosy about what he paints.

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I think this will make an enchanting book, not only for children, but for the grandmothers who read the stories to them. I know I would have read it to mine. This is lovely, Yvonne, very creative as well. Well done, my clever sister!! More love and hugs!! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Pantygynt
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I am glad Wally threw away all the shades grey - forty I believe - because with them on his palette he might haver forgotten about the butterflies and painted something entirely different and a lot less acceptable.

I do love these little Wally tales. After a hard days reviewing all the misery and broken hearts it is right to have something a touch lighter.

The forty shades of grey? No doubt he'll paint those when he's a bit older.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
    That's a long time off. I think Wally has some gypsy blood the way he loves bright colors. He really puts his all in his painting. I have to see that he keeps one foot on the floor. LOL

    Thank you for a lovely review. I'm always happy to see that you like my work. 8-)
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Your character is darling, damommy, and I'm sure children will love reading about him.

You chose your rhyming words well - nothing was forced. I think my favorite phrase is:

he had a little forehead frown

That is so cute! Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
    Oh, thank you. He really puts his all in his painting. I have to see that he keeps one foot on the floor.

    I'm so happy you enjoy hearing about his escapades. 8-)
Comment from rhymelord
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Wonderful, whimsical treatment of a children's subject, giving the young reader something to think about. Looks as though there might be a sequel?
Reg

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
    Thinking of it. I've had several requests for more Wally.

    I'm so glad you like it. Thank you for a lovely review. 8-)
Comment from MelB
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Another well crafted poem about Wally the Weasel painting pots and having fun. Good rhyme and flow. An enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
    Thank you. I'm happy it was. 8-)
reply by MelB on 16-Apr-2016
    You're welcome.
Comment from ioana.u
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It's a great story, you obviously love children and know what they like. It's got a great rhythm and lots of optimism! It's always a pleasure to read your work!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
    Thank you so much for a gracious review. I appreciate it very much. 8-)

    Just everyone know I'm about 8 years old inside. LOL
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
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Always a fun read which reads easily and your rhyme scheme is very well done. Love the artwork of Wally. This is a very good book, so keep them coming.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
    Thank you for saying that. No telling what Wally will get up to. 8-)
Comment from Chris Walker
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Excellent poem for children (and adults like me)! Wally Weasel is quite an interesting little guy-- I can't wait to read more of his adventures. Thanks for sharing. Chris

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
    Thank you. Wally has a lot going on. I'm so glad you want to hear more of him. 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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Wally had to take a far walk to find something inspiring to paint a picture and just when he wants to give up he found lots of butterflies in his neighbor's garden. It will be a nice and colorful painting.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
    Thank you. Just goes to show what he miss close to home. 8-)
Comment from Lancer1979
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What can I say, my friend? You know I love your work. The artwork and the stories you tell. Please, pretty please, publish these! Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.
:D

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
    Thank you for a gracious review. You always make me feel so good.

    I'm looking for someone to draw some pictures. When I do, I'll move a little quicker and try to publish it.

    I can't thank you enough for your support. 8-)
reply by Lancer1979 on 16-Apr-2016
    You're welcome!