Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem and a friendly reminder to call our loved ones before it is too late. The time of death is final and pernanent no second chance.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thank you , Sandra. That message on my phone was both a gift and a heart break.

Comment from Rookette

Excellent

This is such a beautiful and heartfelt poem with such a sad story. I lost my Dad and still have yet to come back for it, maybe you never truly do? This was so lovely and I, too, talk to my Dad all the time. I love the last sentence! I can't tell people enough. Tomorrow is never promised! Tell the ones you love that you love them! Beautiful story xoLeslie

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. Love still lives in us even after they are gone.