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Wally Weasel's Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Wally Paints His Neighborhood"
He's not choosy about what he paints.

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Comment from Mary Wakeford
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A very sweet poem that paints a delightful read for adults and children alike. I really like the background color you chose, and would love it if you would share the name of it :) Wally can come paint at my house any day!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    You might not like it when he finished, but I'll ask. LOL

    I'm so very pleased you enjoyed this story.

    The color is Aureoline Yellow. Bright, isn't it? 8-) Thanks for asking.
reply by Mary Wakeford on 13-Apr-2016
    Yes, I love it! It sounds like Wally paints like me :)
Comment from foxangie123
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I want you to know my little grandchildren love the way you write. Me too. This is yet another amazing piece of writing that we all love. Never stop please. Bravo....

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    I'm so glad to know they like it. I probably won't stop (thank you for saying that) because, as I said in "Still a Youngster," I really am bout 8 years old inside.

    Your review has meant a lot to me. You've brightened my day. 8-)
reply by foxangie123 on 13-Apr-2016
    I'm glad. They are 4, 5, 6. If you can entertain them, you are perfect..... I mean it sweety...
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    Thank you. I'm so happy! 8-)
reply by foxangie123 on 13-Apr-2016
    Hugs your way...
reply by Anonymous Member on 16-Apr-2016
    Thank you. I'm so happy! 8-)
Comment from Sandy P.
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I am always so impressed when I read a children's poem that flows beautifully and also has such lively words that literally jump from the page. I can totally imagine any child really loving this wonderful piece. You did an awesome job, it was a pleasure to read. Sandy

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    I'm so happy you think so. Thank you for a very lovely and gracious review. 8-)
Comment from Douglas Paul
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and started (painted) houses in the lovely color jade. = painting ?

But remember Wally likes his colors very, very bright = meter would be better this way = But please remember Wally likes his colors very bright

This is delightful Yvonne= you are on to something special with Wally. Hope to see more with him

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    Thank you. I'll take another look. 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A great fun poem painting the neighborhood as he sees it with all the different colors of nature. Human houses are not very colorful so he just paint a little square.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    Yup, he paints 'em like he sees 'em. LOL He marches to a different drummer.

    I'm glad you enjoyed it. You review means a lot to me. 8-)
Comment from William Ross
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A wonderfully rhymed tale of wally the weasel paining a picture. Great write and read, makes a great small book for kids. have a great day

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    Thank you for your nice comments. Have a great day, too. 8-)
Comment from chcbeck
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This is a lovely poem for children. It carries a positive message and also adds a touch of mischief which all children love. A really well written and well presented story.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    Thank you. I'm so happy you think so. 8-)
Comment from MizKat
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Hi DaMommy,

Again you have done a really great job in allowing your special Wally Weasel to do some painting. He is so cute and will paint the strangest things, but as long as it makes him happy, it makes me happy too.

Kat

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    Then, we're all happy - you, me, and Wally. LOL

    Thank you. You're always so sweet to me. I'm happy you're enjoying Wally's antics. He' s sure to be up to something else by now. 8-)
reply by MizKat on 14-Apr-2016
    I love reading about Wally Weasel. He's so cute! Kat
Comment from TAB_that's me
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lol - I'm glad he didn't paint 'on' the houses, just a picture of them.

He paints as good as some famous artists that sling and swirl color:)

Teresa



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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    That's what he says. LOL LOL

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate that so much. 8-)