Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is great. You did a super job with the acrostic. Your words flow well and describe DT in a great way. It is interesting to hear views from outside the US. Good job and best wishes in the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Hi jannypan, thank you for giving me your perspective... very interesting. Thank you so much for your comments and your generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from wiljacro

Exceptional

Hi fionageorge. I suspect that there are a multitude of people all over the World, who whole heartedly agree with, and back your observations and strong reservations to the possibility that Trump could succeed in his attempt to represent the glorious USA in world politics! Well done you as an outsider (as I am) in voi8cing your opinion. wiljacro.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Hi wiljacro, thank you for giving me your perspective... very interesting. Thank you so much for your comments and your very generous six star review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This is very clever and creative and I could not agree more. Trump is downright scary. I can't believe he's made it this far. This is good one Marijke

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Hi Douglas, thank you for giving me your perspective... very interesting. Thank you so much for your comments and your generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

I'm with you a 100% on this, I'm not American but I can understand the fears the world may have for this man. Nicely written acrostic with worthwhile message, I hope he doesn't come to the Scots for a character reference.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

I hope he doesn't come to Australia either... Thank you so much for your kind comments and your generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

AMAZING acrostic. I so believe what you say. I have no idea who to vote for this year. I am afraid of all of them. I wish I knew what the country needs, but it is not Donald Trump.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thank you so much for your kind comments and your generous review. Anyone else would have to be better than Trump? Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

You did a great job with this acrostic piece. Certainly sounds sincere and heartfelt. Mind you, all those politicians are corrupt, and I wouldn't vote for any of them. Mind you, I'm not American and I haven't voted since 1990...

All the best
GMG

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Voting is compulsory in Australia... probably a better way to go, at least everyone puts their point across. Whole different voting system though. We also have an election coming up. Oh well... Thanks for your review and warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

yeah good to hear from the other side of the world on this, Trumps an idiot an so are the people who want him in. God help this country. good luck on this.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Hi William, thank you for those comments. I was a bit nervous posting this... Pleased to see you are in agreement. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

Hi Marijke. I wonder why so many people voted for him....
Is it the money and jobs and a wealthy life he promised? Are people blinder by the promises which never will become true?
I fear the day he will become president. Will it lead to more discrimination and war.
I prefer to live in a country in peace. War brings no richness, but peace does...
Great write my dear friend, I hope this is an eye opener, for the USA and the rest of the world. Lots of love and smiles from miles. Fietje xxxx

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thank you so much Fietje. I was a bit nervous putting this up. I thought about it for 24 hours before I released it. I guess I may cop some flack... but at least I have your wonderful support. Yes... I am afraid, if he comes in, it will not be in the best interest for America, nor for the rest of the world. Thanks again, my friend, and warmest regards with miles and miles of Tassie smiles, Marijke :o) xxxxxx