Masterpiece in the Sky
three line poem19 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Gregory,
Your three line poem has spirituality and grace. I love it!
I'm a star gazer anyway...So this really appeals to me.
You've managed to paint a gorgeous vision with your
words with those few syllables. Your presentation is
perfect.
Looks like a winner to me,
Linda
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Gregory,
Your three line poem has spirituality and grace. I love it!
I'm a star gazer anyway...So this really appeals to me.
You've managed to paint a gorgeous vision with your
words with those few syllables. Your presentation is
perfect.
Looks like a winner to me,
Linda
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Thank you Linda! I love your reviews :)
Truly thank you
Comment from chcbeck
A great 3 line poem and I like your insight into the beauty of the nights sky. Its well written and beautifully presented. I particularly like the line "dreams upon astral canvas" Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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A great 3 line poem and I like your insight into the beauty of the nights sky. Its well written and beautifully presented. I particularly like the line "dreams upon astral canvas" Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Thanks so much
Comment from NicciFaye
Hi Gregory. Long time. A wonderful 3 line poem for this content. The opening alliteration of "e" is nice. The continuation of this poem is smooth. The closing line is a great mental imagery. I enjoyed.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Hi Gregory. Long time. A wonderful 3 line poem for this content. The opening alliteration of "e" is nice. The continuation of this poem is smooth. The closing line is a great mental imagery. I enjoyed.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Thank you much. I miss you guys!
I'm so sorry, it wasn't supposed to be posted. I didn't put a picture or a certificate on it yet. I'm sorry.
Comment from Pantygynt
What a pleasure to see you back again Greg. It has been some time. Strangely enough I was sent some cloudscape pics yesterday all the way from Arizona. They were quite fantastic. This little three liner reminded me of them. A nice piece.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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What a pleasure to see you back again Greg. It has been some time. Strangely enough I was sent some cloudscape pics yesterday all the way from Arizona. They were quite fantastic. This little three liner reminded me of them. A nice piece.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Ah hello I missed you!
I'm so sorry, it wasn't supposed to be posted. I didn't put a picture or a certificate on it yet. I'm sorry.
Comment from lightink
Greg, what a delight to see you post something! It's been a while!
This is such a beautiful spiritual poem without mentioning anything specific about God - you show it! 'Eternal eyes" and "astral canvas"! Wow! Beauty on a higher plain! I love this one!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Greg, what a delight to see you post something! It's been a while!
This is such a beautiful spiritual poem without mentioning anything specific about God - you show it! 'Eternal eyes" and "astral canvas"! Wow! Beauty on a higher plain! I love this one!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. I missed everyone!
I'm so sorry, it wasn't supposed to be posted. I didn't put a picture or a certificate on it yet. I'm sorry.
Comment from I am Cat
Well, how lovely to see one of my favorite people and poets, pop up in my inbox. ;)
Thrilled, to say the least.
Good to see you, Greg... and this is a lovely entry. I wish you the best of luck in this contest. I think you have a lovely entry here.
Hugs to you... I do hope you are well.
Cat
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Well, how lovely to see one of my favorite people and poets, pop up in my inbox. ;)
Thrilled, to say the least.
Good to see you, Greg... and this is a lovely entry. I wish you the best of luck in this contest. I think you have a lovely entry here.
Hugs to you... I do hope you are well.
Cat
Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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You are great. I've been busy but I wanted to post something. I miss you!
I'm so sorry, it wasn't supposed to be posted. I didn't put a picture or a certificate on it yet. I'm sorry.
Comment from mountainwriter49
Hi, Greg,
How the world have you been? I was delighted to find this pop up in my inbox tonight.
Your short poem is in fine form. The imagery you provide paints a lovely picture of the artist climbing the hill to set up easel and canvas to paint. I particularly liked "paint dreams upon astral canvas."
I wish you well in the contest.
Ray
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Hi, Greg,
How the world have you been? I was delighted to find this pop up in my inbox tonight.
Your short poem is in fine form. The imagery you provide paints a lovely picture of the artist climbing the hill to set up easel and canvas to paint. I particularly liked "paint dreams upon astral canvas."
I wish you well in the contest.
Ray
Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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My man, how are you? I'm sorry I've been so busy, it's GREAT to hear from you!
I'm so sorry, it wasn't supposed to be posted. I didn't put a picture or a certificate on it yet. I'm sorry.
Comment from koolaid228
Sometimes so few words can really say a lot, and I think you nailed it from my view, you didn't need any artwork because your words painted the picture, thank you for sharing. koolaid228
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Sometimes so few words can really say a lot, and I think you nailed it from my view, you didn't need any artwork because your words painted the picture, thank you for sharing. koolaid228
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Thank you!
I'm so sorry, it wasn't supposed to be posted. I didn't put a picture or a certificate on it yet. I'm sorry.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your 3 line poem. Good job with the format/prompt.
I like the blacground as that reminds me of the night sky. I like the sense of wonderment you infused in your words.
Good job and best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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I enjoyed your 3 line poem. Good job with the format/prompt.
I like the blacground as that reminds me of the night sky. I like the sense of wonderment you infused in your words.
Good job and best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Thank you! I'm so sorry, it wasn't supposed to be posted. I didn't put a picture or a certificate on it yet. I'm sorry.
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Not a problem. Do you keep your work in preview mode? Where it say Preview do you select Yes ? That will keep it private until you release it. Jan
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awesome picture
