Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Poem of Two Journeys"NaPoWriMo April 2016
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Comment from Dawn Munro
Uh, oh - been there, done that (and wish I had a six for this OUTSTANDING rant-poem! Debra, no kidding, this really hit the spot with me. It's EXACTLY how we feel with those 'experts'. It's especially annoying when THEY ARE NOT AS GOOD A DRIVER! (lol)
This is simply brilliant satire! *********************************************!!! SIX STARS, and MORE!
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Uh, oh - been there, done that (and wish I had a six for this OUTSTANDING rant-poem! Debra, no kidding, this really hit the spot with me. It's EXACTLY how we feel with those 'experts'. It's especially annoying when THEY ARE NOT AS GOOD A DRIVER! (lol)
This is simply brilliant satire! *********************************************!!! SIX STARS, and MORE!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Hi Dawn :)
Thank you so much for your great feedback. I appreciate it, along with the mention of 6 stars lol!
Chuffed you enjoyed this one. Best wishes, Debra :)
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LOVED it!
Comment from krys123
Hello Debra;
- the first thing that caught my eye was the picture and then after reading your writing I found that it was very appropriate, supportive and relative to your poem.
-Ha, Ha, I found this writing also to be very humorous and funny and I enjoyed reading this as I laugh at the circumstances obtained in your writing and realized that I found is also happening with me when writing with my wife. Chuckle!
- Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Hello Debra;
- the first thing that caught my eye was the picture and then after reading your writing I found that it was very appropriate, supportive and relative to your poem.
-Ha, Ha, I found this writing also to be very humorous and funny and I enjoyed reading this as I laugh at the circumstances obtained in your writing and realized that I found is also happening with me when writing with my wife. Chuckle!
- Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Hi Alex :) thank you for your great feedback. I appreciate it! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
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You are very welcome Debra.
Alex
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Just because you love him, doesn't mean you have to like everything about him. This reminds me of when I was learning to drive a stick shift and my 6 year-old son was telling me how to do it. Haha. Good write, my friend~Debbie
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Just because you love him, doesn't mean you have to like everything about him. This reminds me of when I was learning to drive a stick shift and my 6 year-old son was telling me how to do it. Haha. Good write, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Cheers Debbie :) I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from jusylee72
Humorous yet honest poem. We often do not like getting preached at. This was an interesting way of telling your story and I like the way you put the words on the other side indicating the ride back.
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Humorous yet honest poem. We often do not like getting preached at. This was an interesting way of telling your story and I like the way you put the words on the other side indicating the ride back.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for your great feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from royowen
Well done Debra, I had good some mentors when a young Christian so I learnt all my scriptures a long time ago, I find I can apply that wisdom in every day situations these days, but I'm glad you're learning them. Nicely written works you've produced here, is it true? Your husband rod up somebody's "bottom"? Well done, blessings Roy
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Well done Debra, I had good some mentors when a young Christian so I learnt all my scriptures a long time ago, I find I can apply that wisdom in every day situations these days, but I'm glad you're learning them. Nicely written works you've produced here, is it true? Your husband rod up somebody's "bottom"? Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
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Hi Roy :) thank you for your great feedback. Kindest regards, Debra
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Most welcome.
Comment from Douglas Paul
LOL glad to hear you are not counting. The truth is probably that it's too hard to have to count so high LOL - fun poem - good sense of humor
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LOL glad to hear you are not counting. The truth is probably that it's too hard to have to count so high LOL - fun poem - good sense of humor
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much, Douglas. I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra :)
