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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Come on Monday..."
This is my prologue for the NaPoWriMo 2016 (30 Poe

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Comment from Douglas Paul
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This is the best poem in this contest that I have read. I am like you - I have 12 grandkids - I love it when they come over but I am always ready for some quiet when they leave LOL

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Hi DPouglas thanks for your kind review and generous rating. I have 12 grandkids too! AND 6 great-grandkids (and another one of the way). Don't ask... I have only 2 children... thereby lies a tale, my friend. Warmest regards :o)
reply by Douglas Paul on 09-Apr-2016
    Well we are both rich beyond measure then
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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We as grand parents do love and enjoy our grandchildren when they visit. But the silence after they left is always sweet. I had my two grandchildren last weekend for two days, we find a lot of items we thought are mussing. Lol.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Yes... nice to have them, nice have have peace. Thanks for your generous review. Wamest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from jusylee72
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Lovely true poem of how it feels to be a grandmother. I too enjoy the quiet when those little darlings go home. I have to read the rest before I vote. But I did like yours.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thanks for lovely review. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from RYME4U
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Vwery well done/You have described the "visit to Grandma" scene perfectly. The rhymes are good and the presentation is beautiful. Excellent job!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thanks for lovely review. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from robyn corum
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I'm just about to be a grandma for the first time in May! I'm over the moon!! I soooo look forward to these experiences! Thanks for sharing!! Good luck!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thanks for lovely review. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from foxangie123
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I could so relate to this. I thought I was the only nana feeling that way. I love the incredible picture. One thing the font is light and borderline small. Great...

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thanks for lovely review. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Huge smiles author what a delightful poem to read about how your 3 grandchildren love you. I liked how you closed your poem with the word quiet.

Gert

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thanks for lovely review. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from Kazzawin
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What a sweet poem!
As a Nana myself I can relate completely to this.....and we must enjoy while it lasts!
I also understand the old adage 'love having them, love giving them back'
A happy read...good luck with it : )

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thanks for lovely review. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from edieas
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I am a grandma and am happy for you that you can still get down on the floor!! This was a sweet, sentimental little poem, one you would expect out of a grandma. Good read! Thanks. edieas

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thanks for lovely review. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Excellent. I was reading the contest entries and I saw this poem I love the picture. Are they of your grandkids? This is a marvelous entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thanks for lovely review. Warmest regards :o)