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Comment from DragonSkulls
You did a fantastic job with this contest entry. I think you chose the perfect pic to use. I wish you luck in the booth. It gets my vote. Have a great night.
DS
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
You did a fantastic job with this contest entry. I think you chose the perfect pic to use. I wish you luck in the booth. It gets my vote. Have a great night.
DS
Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. No body else can see the face but maybe you and I but I so appreciate your vote/
Comment from LIJ Red
A prompt on the picture shown. The kind of art is not what I usually look twice at, but the poem does well with it. Love several versions of "They Call The Wind Mariah." Excellent post.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
A prompt on the picture shown. The kind of art is not what I usually look twice at, but the poem does well with it. Love several versions of "They Call The Wind Mariah." Excellent post.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you . Cute comment about Mariah, Marissa. I love it.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem is creative, strong, and interesting. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
Excellent Poem! The poem is creative, strong, and interesting. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. This was a great challenge.
Comment from Kaydoe
An interesting Angelheart poem that depicts the elusiveness of Lucifer. He seeks out those he would devour, the Bible says. You have a well written poem that
expresses this. Glad Marissa had more work on earth to do. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
An interesting Angelheart poem that depicts the elusiveness of Lucifer. He seeks out those he would devour, the Bible says. You have a well written poem that
expresses this. Glad Marissa had more work on earth to do. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. This was a great challenge.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Ooh, so spiritual and deep sentiment. Colorful fierce descriptions of moods and metaphors as the wind called her name. God, of course, called her name stronger and she obeyed. WELL DONE! liberty justice.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
Ooh, so spiritual and deep sentiment. Colorful fierce descriptions of moods and metaphors as the wind called her name. God, of course, called her name stronger and she obeyed. WELL DONE! liberty justice.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. This was a great challenge. I loved it.
Comment from MelB
I love Angelheart's artwork! One of my faves. Some do have a more sensitive soul and can strongly feel the presence of good or evil. God does always call our name louder! Love that ending.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
I love Angelheart's artwork! One of my faves. Some do have a more sensitive soul and can strongly feel the presence of good or evil. God does always call our name louder! Love that ending.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you . I love her work too. When I saw this picture I scrolled past it then went back. It had a serene name but I saw a face in the blue part of it. That began the story.
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You're welcome. Well done.
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem... meaning after you read it you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
PS I love Angel hearts art work.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem... meaning after you read it you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
PS I love Angel hearts art work.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Her art work is amazing. As I was going through the pictures I stopped at this one because I saw a face hidden it. No one else sees it. thank you so much .
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Take care until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, Your free verse depiction of the art work is very clever and a very good interpretation, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
Hi Mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, Your free verse depiction of the art work is very clever and a very good interpretation, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much I truly had a great time picking the picture and writing the poem.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You certainly saw a lot in this lovely painting, and I can see angels are in there somewhere. I do like the way you have written this, Satan loses again, and God wins. That is the only way it be. Excellent and good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
You certainly saw a lot in this lovely painting, and I can see angels are in there somewhere. I do like the way you have written this, Satan loses again, and God wins. That is the only way it be. Excellent and good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. It was fun to write.
Comment from C.J. 16
A very thought-provoking poem. It is well-written and interesting to read. This is a very good entry for the contest. Best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
A very thought-provoking poem. It is well-written and interesting to read. This is a very good entry for the contest. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much.