Comment from MSJVClarke

Excellent

This is a well written and lovely poem. I could envision your journey as I read the flowing words of each stanza. Each one led to a very peaceful and positive ending. Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016

Thanks for your comments and review. It is a culmination of life experience and some sort urge to think about last innings of our ball game. I woke up with this poem this morning. My best regards and wishes. It has become a chapter of my book, " Random Reflections."
Arun

reply by the author on 06-May-2016

Thanks for your review. After I wrote this poem just few weeks later my x-wife passed away suddenly and I wondered for whom did I write this poem? Our thoughts come to us from our mind or is there something that sends them? I appreciate your encouraging words.

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

I liked your poem and I enjoyed your notes. I used to be a kayaker so I particularly enjoyed that analogy. This was well done

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016

Douglas Paul:
I appreciate your comments. I wanted to learn Kayaking but never had a chance. I bet you found peace and tranquility doin that journey on the waters. Thanks. With the best regards and wishes.
Arun

reply by the author on 06-May-2016

Thank you Douglas. I appreciate your review. I went through many rapids and turbulences like everyone else and found some peace but not yet reached to that illusive destination. I hope I will have the strength and courage to keep going.

reply by Douglas Paul on 06-May-2016

Hang in there