Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Marijke,

This sound like a good plan...love cheese
and champagne is good too! Is that your
own photo?

I think you did a great job on your 2-4-2
entry...Cheers!

Linda

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016

Thank you, Linda. No, I found the photo on the web somewhere, didn't have name the photographer, just one of those lots of photos sites. Thanks for your kind comments, Linda. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Yes, that does sound good. You've made me hungry (and thirsty) with your 2-4-2 poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Thanks Debbie, for your kind review and good luck wishes. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Realist101

Excellent

Hi Marijke! I love this even tho I don't like cheese. It reminds me that I need to get well and take a break from stress. I wish I could live a life of wine and roses if even just for a short while. ! :) Lovely poem!! x

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Cheese, seafood, fruit and chocolate in that order! Thanks for lovely review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

:-)

I could not agree more! With

champagne
with cheese platter
life's good

(especially if the hand the is pouring is generous! LOL)

I think this has excellent chances in the contest ;-)

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2016

Hi Leineco, thanks for your generous review. Mmmm... a generous hand, definitely! Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Yum! You've made me salivate--it's time for dinner!! I liked the way you managed to include alliteration in this tiny form and portray the good life in your words and the picture you selected. Best wishes in the contest. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016

Thanks once again, Joan, for your observations and generous review, I'm pleased it time for dinner! Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

I'll go with that, only a glass though. Good entry and thought on the cheese and wine. good luck on this and enjoy your day.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016

Hi William. Thanks for your generous review and rating. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Life doesn't get much simpler or better than that ... well, proving you are not lactose intolerant that is! very nicely constructed little piece.

GMG

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016

Lucky I am no lactose intolerant, as I am a bit of a cheese-a-holic! Thanks for your generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Marijke!

You have my vote for champagne and cheese! :) This poem is sparing on syllables but certainly paints a picture of the good life (I might want to add chocolate to the list, too! lol but that's just me) Love it!

Good luck in the contest.

Kim

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016

Mmmm... me too. But only allowed 2/4/2 syllables - and cheese just wins out for me over the chocolate - especially with champagne! Thanks for your generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

I would probably rather have wine, but the thought is a good one LOL. Life is good when we can kick back and enjoy those relaxing moments. Have a good day,Marijke

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016

Hi Douglas, I started with red wine (my preference) but when I get together with some of my friends, they prefer champagne - especially when the cork pops! red wine / champagne / white wine - all 2 syllables, but the champagne won out today! Thanks for your kind review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Chris Walker

Excellent

Oh fun! Champagne!
Perfect syllable count and a good entry in the 2/4/2 contest
Your chosen artwork enhancing the presentation of this micro poem nicely.
Good luck in the contest. Chris

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016

Hi Chris. Yep... nothing like some nice bubbly - although I am very partial to red wine, but with cheese on a warm afternoon, a nice cold champagne will do just fine! Thanks for your generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)