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Comment from Serendipity!
That's a good poem. There are many lines I like: let's see if I can pick out a few of my favorites,I believe life is wonderful
We choose which side of wonderful we live in
If I only write as if I know the answers.
If I only write the happy side.
If I only write as if I have never made mistakes
then you will never know me. (Can we really love someone until we see- and accept their weaknesses?)
and become who we really are (Nah, I wouldn't want to be the green bud I was in my early twenties!)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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That's a good poem. There are many lines I like: let's see if I can pick out a few of my favorites,I believe life is wonderful
We choose which side of wonderful we live in
If I only write as if I know the answers.
If I only write the happy side.
If I only write as if I have never made mistakes
then you will never know me. (Can we really love someone until we see- and accept their weaknesses?)
and become who we really are (Nah, I wouldn't want to be the green bud I was in my early twenties!)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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thank you so much. I appreciate the people on this site so much.
Comment from Rookette
This is really good. I loved the poem, the concept. You are absolutely correct. Life isn't all peaches and cream. Things go wrong, we make mistakes, we live, we learn. If you've nothing bad to say about your life at all...you haven't lived. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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This is really good. I loved the poem, the concept. You are absolutely correct. Life isn't all peaches and cream. Things go wrong, we make mistakes, we live, we learn. If you've nothing bad to say about your life at all...you haven't lived. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. We gain wisdom from our mistakes when we listen to our inner selves.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Which Side of Wonderful Is a very nice poem that provides for your reader a contrast in life. One that is idealistic plastic and fake, while the other is sometimes graphic, earthy but real. You have invited us to take the latter form of self revelation rather than the former story of self adulation. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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Which Side of Wonderful Is a very nice poem that provides for your reader a contrast in life. One that is idealistic plastic and fake, while the other is sometimes graphic, earthy but real. You have invited us to take the latter form of self revelation rather than the former story of self adulation. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. You make a wonderful point about not pretending the world is perfect.
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You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from tfawcus
It is by presenting both sides that we expose the whole of ourselves, no longer being just a flat character for the reader. We all make mistakes, that is what makes us human. However, carrying on with a positive attitude carries us through when we look for the right side of Wonderful. What a very good way of putting it! I did enjoy this poem and the sentiment behind it.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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It is by presenting both sides that we expose the whole of ourselves, no longer being just a flat character for the reader. We all make mistakes, that is what makes us human. However, carrying on with a positive attitude carries us through when we look for the right side of Wonderful. What a very good way of putting it! I did enjoy this poem and the sentiment behind it.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. I agree with you. Let's tell the truth and live.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem has a super message that you expressed well. Good job on that part. The picture is awesome. I like the way you arranged your words. Your lines flow smoothly. Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016
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Your poem has a super message that you expressed well. Good job on that part. The picture is awesome. I like the way you arranged your words. Your lines flow smoothly. Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016
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thank you, I appreciate your words.
Comment from foxangie123
I so much loved this you wrote. You did an amazing job here and I'm out of exceptional six and I don't like it because this is great..
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016
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I so much loved this you wrote. You did an amazing job here and I'm out of exceptional six and I don't like it because this is great..
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. I love life so much, though trust me it is not always wonderful. You made my day.
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Love that title. Just telling the truth.
