Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

Nothing like arriving late to your own wedding to make the groom wonder if he's been jilted at the alter. At least they can laugh about it in the years to come. Whew! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thanks for the review.Yes I imagine until you see their face at the alter there might always be that doubt ha . Cheers, j

Comment from johngie

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

You did a great job with less than 60 words. You have told a full story, beginning, middle and end. Not as easy as some would think. The words have to be carefully chosen or the reader is left hanging. Good job.

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review. I thought it was 100 words, then had to cut the story by half. Cheers, j

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Bringing this in just under the required word limit, you did a good job with a pretty difficult prompt. Poor bride.

Good luck in the competition.
GMG

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thanks for the review. Poor groom, not knowing what was going on and the waiting. Cheers, have a nice Sunday, j

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

A perfect story for a 60 word dash. The action starts line 1 and keeps your guessing till the moment of the wedding is revealed. I found myself going back and checking the clues. When you know why Jenna's late, it all falls into place. You told us everything by leaving plot breadcrumbs throughout. Cleverly done. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review. I originally wrote 100 words, then realized it was only 60, yikes.Cheers, have a nice Sunday, j