Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Roly-Polying Peas"NaPoWriMo April 2016
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Comment from royowen
With me it was always my Brussels sprouts, I can remember nearly gagging on them, but mum wouldn't give me desert until I did eat them. I'm good now, I always eat my veggies, training sure lasts.. Well done, Debra, beautifully even and nicely timed and worded, skilfully rendered, blessings, Roy
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With me it was always my Brussels sprouts, I can remember nearly gagging on them, but mum wouldn't give me desert until I did eat them. I'm good now, I always eat my veggies, training sure lasts.. Well done, Debra, beautifully even and nicely timed and worded, skilfully rendered, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Hello Roy :) Thank you so much for your great feedback. Glad to hear you're eating your greens like a good lad! LOL
Best wishes, Debra :)
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Comment from BeasPeas
This poem is adorable and amusing, Debra. Loved it (especially "roly-polied"). Good rhyming and cadence. Playful presentation works well with topic. Your piece reminds me of a similar incident with my kids. When my husband told them they had to eat their peas--they shoved them underneath their mashed potatoes. For some reason he didn't mind they didn't eat their potatoes. When cleaning off the plates, I discovered where they hid the peas. Marilyn
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This poem is adorable and amusing, Debra. Loved it (especially "roly-polied"). Good rhyming and cadence. Playful presentation works well with topic. Your piece reminds me of a similar incident with my kids. When my husband told them they had to eat their peas--they shoved them underneath their mashed potatoes. For some reason he didn't mind they didn't eat their potatoes. When cleaning off the plates, I discovered where they hid the peas. Marilyn
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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LOL! That's funny! Kids will try anything to get out of eating the less favourable parts of their meal LOL
Thank you for your lovely feedback and for sharing that memory with me :)
Best wishes, Debra x
