Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A well written antonym poem. When a storm is raging in your head the best thing to do will be to go on your knees and find peace with God.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Rdfrdmom2, a very good antonym poem.

I especially liked:

storm
rages in my soul
until I commune with Him

(And Faith will see you through)

As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

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Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Great word picks and excellent thought for this prompt. Nice presentation. Best of luck in the voting booth with this worthy entry.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

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Comment from Kaydoe

Excellent

An Antonym poem about the "storm" and "peace". The 3rd verse is my favorite,
"Until I commune with Him". Well written. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

Wonderful artwork which gives us a feeling of hope. Your great contest entry message is really what it is all about with our Savior. It is not always easy when Satan creates a storm inside us, but if the faith is strong enough, the storm can go away. Jan, I wish you good luck in this contest.

Bless you and yours,

Jim

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good, life is full of storms until we except and make peace with the lord. great write and thought. good luck on this and have a great day.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your antonym poem. You expressed the 2 words in a great way. Good job with the format. The image is awesome. Together with your words, this is an enjoyable read with a great message. Good job and best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

It's the communication part that I need to work on. Sometimes it just needs to rain, right? You did a great job with this and I love the rainbows because no matter how big the storm the sun will shine again

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

thanks, again - sometimes it's the rainbow that helps most

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Peace in the heart is always better than a trouble soul. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

thanks, Charlie - you are so right

reply by c_lucas on 03-Apr-2016

You're welcome, RDF. Charlie

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Great short poem. It conveys in very few words a true story. I hope you enjoyed writing it. It is hard to get a message across in such fashion but you did. Congratulations.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

thanks, jusylee72 - yes, I enjoyed trying to find the right two words to use, then add the filler between them
this is my first antonym poem, but likely not my last