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Poems by Michael

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Comment from djsaxon
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Your pen always finds a place in my heart. Sometimes you brighten my day. Sometimes you darken it a little. This is a bright day. DJ xxx

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2016
    thanks DJ...-smile-
    been working a lot. just went through my portfolio and found her....I'd forgotten how beautiful she was. so I decided to promote...ah days are always different man. its life...-smile- love to you Bro-
Comment from MoniqueMarie
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Seriously Dude..you must have enemies...certainly was not me...I try not to destroy anything...in my life...Do no harm...Buddhist saying..I have been taking care of kids..and teens in family...no time for mischief. I seriously hope your issues end well. Maybe new free stuff? Again..I wish you the best. Love your music.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
    I have to get a new dryer now.
    my stove is damaged. My master bed room mattress has a baseball hole burned in it. someone "chose" to do this who swore they loved me...can you make any sense of that...? the toilet in there has something flushed I cant quite figure yet...I'm getting ready to pull it off and find out. my sheets and towels have disappeared...I found them once remember. I'm going to need the tax information for the subcontractors...if you don't mind. thanks Monique-
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016
    enemies...? well I got some less than friends....and apparently an appetite for fruitcake...I keep dieting...but ah just like Christmas...fat like dat-
Comment from Gloria ....
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Michael, what a beautiful poem and a lovely selection of music to go along with it. Of course the artwork goes without saying.

And last but not least many congrats on your POM nomination. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
    I know...I've been waiting for her to release. She's got another new one I really like. Hey G...-smile-...ah yea that was nice, lots big guns this time. Hope you're well....love michael
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Hi Michael, this is another beautiful poem, you should have put it in the Easter contest, not that I have seen you do much in the way of contests though. Please take a virtual 6, hate it when I have run out so soon. There are so many lovely lines in this poem, dear Michael, you are a natural when it come to the spiritual side of yourself, you bring God out in ways no other can. I hope you are happy, my friend, love you lots, always. Sandy. xxx

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
    Hi Sandy...-smile-
    ah contests getting me wanting to win. and I'm just a lil' too me for that I'm afraid. Wow what a great thing to say...its what I did...I mean when I first started writing "my God poems". before I ever came here. I would frame one and give to "most" customers...only when I was leaving. -smile-...thought I was doing something for God. Thank you for saying that Sandy. love you michael
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Michael,

"Cross my heart hope alive"
"human need being loved"
"one well never run dry"

There is the "holy place"
safe place...Jesus...triune
lines...

Perfect,
Linda

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016
    Hey Linda...-smile-
    thank you sweet...appreciate you enjoying. love Michael
Comment from l.raven
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HI Michael, very nicely written you...
favorite lines...
above all basic necessity
covered up or naked bared
human need being loved

I love your wording...
and your picture is priceless
love the video...

truly one of your best...love you Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016
    Hello Beautiful...-smile-
    why thank you for the red bull...I'm super charged. -wink-....love Michael
reply by l.raven on 01-Apr-2016
    HI Handsome...so glad to here that...wink..love ya too Linda
Comment from I am Cat
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Hello Michael,
Lovely words in this free verse... love these:

beautiful sustains us...
(lovely, especially, for me... I see it in another context... wonderfully thought provoking words)

cross my heart...hope- (love these as well)

I'm not very religious, and I know this is a poem of faith, but some lines spoke to me nevertheless... and of course, always the way you say things, is just gorgeous.
well done,
cat



 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016
    Hey....-smile-
    well I'm not very "religious" in the same, insane way "most" consider pleasing to God. I don't get dressed up to pretend once a week, I'm better than you because I do. Some folk "religiously" offend God and those who would be drawn to the Well. Thanks for stopping by. love Michael
Comment from michaelcahill
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This is one of the most soothing pieces I've ever read of yours. I love that line, cross my heart-- hope. All of this hits home. How simple love makes everything, yes? Excellence. :)) mikey

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016
    Wow...well thank you...this one was difficult. just couldn't get it right at first...I finally worked it out. Appreciate ya Bud....love Michael
Comment from babyross
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Alive consumes dead to right
trust measures faithful sight
understanding tastes satifies
Beautiful and I like this Reconcile. Your talent continues to grace us.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
    Hi...-smile-
    thank you very much. you say blush me words....love ya michael
Comment from NicciFaye
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Cherished breast suckled from spiritual soul nourishment beautiful sustains us...Yes it does Michael...yes it does...human beings do need unconditional agape love....an ever traveling road that many people get lost on seeking something that is not on ground, but in heaven.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016
    Hi Nic...-smile-
    yes maam...and we keep disappointing ourselves.
    I cant feel God warm my flesh, see His witness in my defense as immediate honor confirms. I cant look into His eyes and know where I stand. Don't get me wrong...I know He's there...I even know He loves me...recently confirmed. but He isn't everyday human....He cant make okay right away. love michael