Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Ohhh i so wish I had a 6 left for this. What a powerful story this is. Your writing is clear and fluid and your storey flows seamlessly. Very well done

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thank you. I'm ever so glad you like the story. I wrote it in a big rush and was afraid it was no good.

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

I truly love this. It is precious and i do believe it is a true story of faith. Marriage is a journey that we all should take without thinking it is going to be perfect. I think you did a wonderful job of telling this story.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thank you. It's not a true story but I have heard of such things happening.

Comment from Jonesy

Excellent

If the author wrote this in a hurry, well, I was I could first drafts as error-free.

This has all the elements needed to make a good story, and easily worthy of a 5.

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thank you. I'm ever so glad that you like the story. I was afraid it was going to be no good. I wrote it too fast.