When Blood Collides
Viewing comments for Chapter 84 "Back to California"A family's love is tested.
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Catalina Island needs a passport? Why? Sounds like a gorgeous condo, but 500 grand? I wonder what teh monthly payments were. And what were their jobs? Can they afford to furnish it, too? Can't wait to hear more.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Catalina Island needs a passport? Why? Sounds like a gorgeous condo, but 500 grand? I wonder what teh monthly payments were. And what were their jobs? Can they afford to furnish it, too? Can't wait to hear more.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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We need passports for identification at the airport in order to fly back to Florida. Nichole is private about discussing her finances. Jeff was a tax write-off. I doubt if he pulled in over twenty thousand a year if lucky with his free-lance jobs. They already had furnish enough to fill it. Black leather sofa and black leather chairs and footrests. Not my taste! I don't like leather furniture no matter what color and black is depressing.
Comment from Pyrrho
I congratulate you, SPITFIRE. You are one of the few writers who can get me to read posts as long as those you submit. Why? I have no idea. Mayby it is just that you look so interesting.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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I congratulate you, SPITFIRE. You are one of the few writers who can get me to read posts as long as those you submit. Why? I have no idea. Mayby it is just that you look so interesting.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Why thank you, my friend. I'm quite flattered by your attention. Must be the red hair.:-)
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You may be correct. I always did envy folks with red hair.
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Wish it were natural. LOL
Comment from Jay Squires
A great chapter, Shari, fun to read, tense, especially when contrasted with your laconic "everything's cool" attitude.
"No," the same clerk shook her head. [Not a speech tag, so you need a period after "No," or {the same clerk said, shaking her head.} >> easier to put a period.]
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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A great chapter, Shari, fun to read, tense, especially when contrasted with your laconic "everything's cool" attitude.
"No," the same clerk shook her head. [Not a speech tag, so you need a period after "No," or {the same clerk said, shaking her head.} >> easier to put a period.]
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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I love you, Jay. You find my spags right away so I can get the change in before the others find it.
Shari xx
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I was afraid I was being a tad nitpicky about that one.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Wow, an expensive condo. I'm glad you got to go see it though. I hope everyone got along and you found your pocketbook. Good post, my friend. I'm looking forward to reading more~Debbie
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Wow, an expensive condo. I'm glad you got to go see it though. I hope everyone got along and you found your pocketbook. Good post, my friend. I'm looking forward to reading more~Debbie
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Thanks, Debbie. I forgot all about this pocketbook story until I started to write. The others were quite disgusted with me!
