Christine's Poems
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Comment from winnona
I think you have completed the challenge of this contest well. Your artwork combines with the poem and completing it. Your words flow from line to line combining and sending the message of your poem to the reader.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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I think you have completed the challenge of this contest well. Your artwork combines with the poem and completing it. Your words flow from line to line combining and sending the message of your poem to the reader.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you very much winnona, for your lovely review and comments for this post. I really appreciate your time to give me feedback Many Cheers Christine😃
Comment from ciliverde
Hon, you weren't supposed to put your name on this one. Lol - it's a very good Pantygynt, well-penned, flows beautifully. It's moody, which always appeals to me.
Well done!
Carol
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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Hon, you weren't supposed to put your name on this one. Lol - it's a very good Pantygynt, well-penned, flows beautifully. It's moody, which always appeals to me.
Well done!
Carol
Comment Written 16-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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Opps Carol I have taken my name off ( I am usually so careful not to do anything wrong with these, but just a slip up totally unintentional so thanks for that, ) Thanks for your review and lovely comments. Always in to try something different. I like this style too Cheers ??
Comment from Muffins
Such a sad mindset this narrator carries. Instead of forgiving herself and other for past deeds and moving on, she's allowing the heavy load to control her. Intense them.
The syllable count is correct. This new form is a challenge ,but you conquered it.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Such a sad mindset this narrator carries. Instead of forgiving herself and other for past deeds and moving on, she's allowing the heavy load to control her. Intense them.
The syllable count is correct. This new form is a challenge ,but you conquered it.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Hi Muffins, Thank you very much for giving my poem a review and excellent rating. This is not biographical, instead once I wrote the first line the rest just followed and I enjoyed the challenge of the contest. i have few regrets life is pretty good many Cheers Christine
Comment from Liberty Justice
Poet regrets he had not known something. Poet would have said or did something differently. Tell me, dear poet, what do you regret? Poem is sorrowful tone. liberty justice.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Poet regrets he had not known something. Poet would have said or did something differently. Tell me, dear poet, what do you regret? Poem is sorrowful tone. liberty justice.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Hello Liberty Justice and Thanks so much for stopping by to read my entry for this quest. Sometimes some things are best unsaid and let sleeping dogs lie bit thoughts can be released in verse Cheers for your time and excellent rating
Comment from mvbrooks
Interesting, compelling poem. The first line "I walk along a lonely road
In solitude; my own." seems to indicate that the solitude was self-induced.
The rhyme scheme is unexpected (except it fits the poem type requirements) and makes the reader read more slowly, taking in the message more deeply. well done.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Interesting, compelling poem. The first line "I walk along a lonely road
In solitude; my own." seems to indicate that the solitude was self-induced.
The rhyme scheme is unexpected (except it fits the poem type requirements) and makes the reader read more slowly, taking in the message more deeply. well done.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Hi mybrooks. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem for this contest, it was a challenge to meet the requirements and I hope I have managed to do so . The theme is really not self induced, but more what I imagined some people may face. Glad you thought this well done Cheers to you
Comment from foxangie123
This is really, really, really great. It's exceptional yet I don't have six stars left to give you. I like when you write like this. Excellent penning.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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This is really, really, really great. It's exceptional yet I don't have six stars left to give you. I like when you write like this. Excellent penning.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Hi foxangie123. You are so encouraging in your review and I am so pleased you really liked this. It was a fun challenge for me to have a go. Many Cheers for your support
Comment from Patricia Brooks
The best I can say about this poem is that I believe it. And that's a significant accomplishment for any poem! The simple "if only I had known" at the end is very effective. A brave and honest poem.
Patricia
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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The best I can say about this poem is that I believe it. And that's a significant accomplishment for any poem! The simple "if only I had known" at the end is very effective. A brave and honest poem.
Patricia
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Hi Patricia, I thank you very much for your lovely words for my poem and although the theme is of regrets I have few and over the years have resolved most of them . I just love to write and have a go at different styles. With many Cheers to you
Comment from cedarsflee
Deep! Wow! What a wonderfully composed poem. The message reflects the tone throughout. Not only that, this is eloquently written and worthy of the rating of excellent. Well done indeed. Looking forward to more!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Deep! Wow! What a wonderfully composed poem. The message reflects the tone throughout. Not only that, this is eloquently written and worthy of the rating of excellent. Well done indeed. Looking forward to more!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Hi cedarsflee, Thanks you for your great feedback and lovely comments for my poem and I send you many Cheers for your time to read and review my work . lots more to come
Comment from William Ross
Very good written very well has great meaning i think you nailed the style on this prompt with a tale of regret. we all must reap what we sow. Good luck
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Very good written very well has great meaning i think you nailed the style on this prompt with a tale of regret. we all must reap what we sow. Good luck
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Hi William, I am so pleased you liked this and for you excellent rating. yes we all must reap what we sow so go lightly on the seeds. Cheers my friend
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
We live our lives as we think it is the right way. One day you realize you made a lot of mistakes along the way. Make things right while you have the chance. ('You' are used as a generalisation to human kind and not to you as the author of this work. )
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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We live our lives as we think it is the right way. One day you realize you made a lot of mistakes along the way. Make things right while you have the chance. ('You' are used as a generalisation to human kind and not to you as the author of this work. )
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016
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Hi Sandra, Thanks for your words of wisdom and yes we all make some mistakes and so fix as many as you can while you can. I appreciate your review and great rating for this work of mine Cheers
