The Wonder
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Comment from Joan E.
I liked your wordplay in the title and the parallel, animated picture. I took your "burnt down just like job" to mean that you lost your job--if that is the case, I am very sorry. On a happier note, "heaven is rainbows after shower" is a delightful description. Hugs and take good care of yourself- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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I liked your wordplay in the title and the parallel, animated picture. I took your "burnt down just like job" to mean that you lost your job--if that is the case, I am very sorry. On a happier note, "heaven is rainbows after shower" is a delightful description. Hugs and take good care of yourself- Joan
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Job...j...you know the oldest book in the Bible...job...hm...what am i missing J...? Well if i've lost my job...how the hell would I do that Joan...-headtilt-...ahaha....no although jose' is doing most of my work now...I still manage....that and can collecting almost pay the bills....so I'm still alive unless I get sick...i'm American...-smile- love you Michael
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Well that's a relief! Thanks for letting me know how silly I am to have missed the biblical reference to Job!! Here's to dreams filled with "rainbows"- Joan
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did I spell it right...?
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I think so--I was just dense! I'll try not to let it happen again. lol -Joan
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no...ta...you're not...sstop it...just scared me thats all...I'm not the best speller ya know...-headtilt-
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O.K. We can both rest easy. Smiles- Joan
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I can't listen to the music yet. Need my speakers hooked up. Teri
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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This is a very interesting poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I can't listen to the music yet. Need my speakers hooked up. Teri
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Hi Teri...-smile-
I thank you kindly. its really my pleasure, i'd do it even if everyone wasn't honest. love Michael
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I believe you my friend.
Comment from NicciFaye
soul to soul pure honest to God eyes swear set the flesh on fire history read open gospel...I've love you anyway...
Those words just rippled through my spirit Michael...
Exorcism never seen it coming..and another song to add to my playlist...
You have such an erratic and spontaneous loving spirit-man...can never quite put my finger on it...but curious to always want to touch...10 stars shooting towards the heaven...I don't even have six..forgive me...
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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soul to soul pure honest to God eyes swear set the flesh on fire history read open gospel...I've love you anyway...
Those words just rippled through my spirit Michael...
Exorcism never seen it coming..and another song to add to my playlist...
You have such an erratic and spontaneous loving spirit-man...can never quite put my finger on it...but curious to always want to touch...10 stars shooting towards the heaven...I don't even have six..forgive me...
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Hey Nic...-smile-
well mine too...still. ah -smile-...you're good for me nicci...love you Michael
Comment from winnona
Interesting combination. With visual effects completes the poem well. Your choice of words flow line to line.They create a strong message to the reader of the poem. I think you did a good job on this.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Interesting combination. With visual effects completes the poem well. Your choice of words flow line to line.They create a strong message to the reader of the poem. I think you did a good job on this.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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why thank you Winnona....-smile-....appreciate your say so. Like you i hear more than voice over....-smile- ...have a great day....love Michael
Comment from Ricky1024
hi Michael my son they say that because I don't have any left in your day best and closest replace and I could ever find you write so much like me you sure you're not my kid maybe a spiritual life. Your piece was sad demonic evil and soda so so deep I only gave it 5 Stars good they just think they started out with them on Sunday I think they only give us 4 but then I reviewed probably 100 piece of sense in the promote my peace tickets I got them blue ribbon on his weight all time best already had a thick enough for music I just stuff sent out Jason's ladder is a rewrite from 2016 years ago are I picked out the original drawing have a lot of going through his name I picked out yetthat's from the year 2006 this is it reviews for the phone messes everything up but the let me your pieces wonderful day but let me know where you get your artwork from I'll figure get the fan story get back to me on that in the b sure to catch the odds jason the ladder peace with his I'll my top 3 best interest 10 years ago and now in the reality 6 is give it to the started off thanks sun to 24 o u t
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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hi Michael my son they say that because I don't have any left in your day best and closest replace and I could ever find you write so much like me you sure you're not my kid maybe a spiritual life. Your piece was sad demonic evil and soda so so deep I only gave it 5 Stars good they just think they started out with them on Sunday I think they only give us 4 but then I reviewed probably 100 piece of sense in the promote my peace tickets I got them blue ribbon on his weight all time best already had a thick enough for music I just stuff sent out Jason's ladder is a rewrite from 2016 years ago are I picked out the original drawing have a lot of going through his name I picked out yetthat's from the year 2006 this is it reviews for the phone messes everything up but the let me your pieces wonderful day but let me know where you get your artwork from I'll figure get the fan story get back to me on that in the b sure to catch the odds jason the ladder peace with his I'll my top 3 best interest 10 years ago and now in the reality 6 is give it to the started off thanks sun to 24 o u t
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Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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I'm 54 Pop...when you gonna quit calling me kid....-headtilt-
haha well I took a liking to you after you starting copying my style...so yea if you promise to leave me in the will its cool with me...-smile- yes Pop...i will check out the all about soon i promise. love Kid.
