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Comment from MoniqueMarie
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The music and words are magical and the hands catching raindrops so pretty.
Although I do not always interpret the poetry as you may intend it, I still enjoy it. So many listening. You have lots of fans.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
    ah I have a few friends. Fans are for movie stars and hero's...i'm just Michael. thank you. love Michael.
Comment from DonandVicki
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I like this romantic and poetic write. You pull the reader into the poem with your words and you include your emotions for all to see.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
    -smile-...yes perhaps.
    every life has truth lived...and something sacred.
    appreciate you enjoying. love michael
Comment from cedarsflee
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The tone implies that something sorrowful had occured or is occuring but there's also the intonation that a spiritual rebirth is in progress. At least, that's how I interpreted the poem. Interesting write.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
    very perceptive...-smile-
    expect rebirth isn't necessary for that which can never die.
    appreciate you enjoying . love Michael
Comment from michaelcahill
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I love how the beginning is somewhat uncertain in a way and then after much growth it becomes with the very same words more than certain if that makes sense. This has a compelling flow to it. Love the word choice here and how they tie to the word before and after. Must read several times. Yep, poetic. mikey

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
    Hey Man...-smile-
    well thank you kindly Bro. I always tweak em' after I post em'.
    probably gonna get arrested one of these days....haha...love Michael
Comment from foxangie123
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In the first stanza do you mean demonic because the word demon by itself knocks the flow out of order. That was the only thing I saw. Good.

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2016
    well he's a relative, no wonder you recognized him...-wink-
Comment from chcbeck
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A brilliantly crafted poem. I must admit the title led to me expecting reign of kings and queens. A great poem in style and content thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2016
    why thank you for your honesty a rarity indeed to be cherished. ..-smile-...appreciate you....love Michael
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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God reign totally over us, our state of mind is the place where He took control over our thoughts. We have to be submissive to His call all the time.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2016
    We should.....but ...thank God we dont "have" to...to be still His. Now its "always" best granted ...to avoid the consequence of not being...but God loves us Jesus Christ wide...and every prodigal son can come home if and when he comes to his senses...in honest to God sincerity....thank you. love Michael.........
Comment from Nika2016
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Fixed. Everything. Ronni said it best...mystic..odd heady sensation,yet heart-felt emotion. I don't have six stars to give to you. The song is beautiful. You did well, Mikey. Smile.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2016
    -smile-...hold your breath-
reply by Nika2016 on 10-Mar-2016
    I can't it popped up on review so now I have to pass you by..bye-bye
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2016
    finger wave...-smile-
reply by Nika2016 on 10-Mar-2016
    Strange..Yannis Varoufakis popped up on your song. You know him Greek finance minister...??? Why is he there? Oh well.. I post to his blogs but he should not be here at Fanstory. :)
Comment from Ronni
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Well indeed Michael,
This reflection evocatively conveys a mixture of distress, fear,
apprehension yet a subtle trust ambling through it nonetheless. Evokes a sense of the preordained, mystic,
odd heady sensation. Yet throughout, a benevolent,
heart felt emotion revolves in its theme and tone.
(If I've grasped it anywhere near your ingenious intention;
if not, least I tried.) Beautiful capture from beginning to end.
Thanks for sharing...great pic and video.
Best always, Ronni

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
    you succeeded...from the first surprise.
    Thank you Wonderful. love you Michael
reply by Ronni on 09-Mar-2016
    Very welcome! Always, Ronni
Comment from l.raven
Exceptional
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HI Michael, let me try again...wiped me out the first time...
I love this...
I've loved you anyway...
always in every celebration
Heaven is rainbows after shower
God knows you love Him...

exorcism never seen it coming...
one of your best Baby....
and I love your video...
written in own unique words sweetie...
very well written...
love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
    well thank you touchstone you always lift me...-smile-...thank you for the six Sweetie....love you Michael
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
reply by l.raven on 09-Mar-2016
    you so welcome sweet boy...so glad I could lift you...love you...xxoo me