Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine chapter, Rhonda, and this should now be called, "The Uni-Sex Daredevil Squad", just a suggestion--and good luck to Rasha keeping the reporters in line!

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016

I think we should give you the job of reporter guarding!! I will submit your idea name to the "Girls"! Thanks for reading,
Rhonda

reply by Mike Stevens on 10-Mar-2016

Thanks, Rhonda, and I'm between jobs right now, so...!

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016

Just my luck!

Comment from MelB

Excellent

A great chapter, Rhonda. A new Daredevil's group with the younger girls and true to form, one male member. I can't wait to see what happens at assembly and with all their Daredevil shirts on.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016

It's quickly approaching! Thanks so much for staying with the story. There's a lot of background, but it's necessary for the rest of the book. I appreciate you telling the parts you like!
Rhonda

reply by MelB on 09-Mar-2016

My pleasure, Rhonda!

Comment from giraffmang

Exceptional

Hi Rhonda,

Really enjoyed this chapter. things moved on a fair bit here, with the new girls, and guy, all lined up waiting in the wings as it were! Good pacing and development. technically excellent as far as I could tell.

great stuff
G

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016

Wow, I'm so pleased and impressed! Your 6's are a rarity and I am deeply honored. I'll confess, I've watched your writing closely and learned a bit more on describing a scene using a few words here and there to give more of a picture of what's going on. It's what you're especially good at. I still have more work on that part as I tend to get into the story and forget to bring everyone along with me. Thanks again,
Rhonda

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

Great next chapter. Nancy finds that friendship and admiration come from unlikely places. The Daredevil
Girls have a new group. Feels real, Rhonda.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016

Thank you, Nika! I appreciate the support and comments. I know Nancy hasn't started her stories yet, but in a way, she has. All this background has a purpose of the "outer story". Again, thanks!
Rhonda

reply by Nika2016 on 09-Mar-2016

No complaints..not from me. I meant the teacher with the T-shirts. Writing from phone. Mistakes.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

The daredevil girls are sure to be a big hit especially with the younger girls. They all need new heroes whether they are Zombies or mermaids. I like your tale.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016

Thank you, and you have nailed the entire premise behind this book. I will have these characters work out real problems with pretend beings. Thanks for picking up on that!
Rhonda

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Ahhh OK I se you finished the chapter here, I like the fact that your are hibtibg at a new batch of Daredevilsinthis one. Your writing is great as always. I hope you are planning on publishing this. I think this is a great book for young adults

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016

Thank you so much for your comments and support. I actually did publish it before, and its sequel, but was never happy with it as there were so many flaws, so I bought the book back from the publisher and am rewriting. The sequel is with a different company and in much better form, so I'll leave it. This one, though, needed help! So, if you see something you think would be a good way to go with it, let me know. I am definitely open to ideas. I do really value your input!
Rhonda

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

A group of students rally behind Nancy as she gets ready. A chapter in the book The Daredevil Girls From Bunker Hil. Daredevil Girl Supporters.' This is another excellent development in your ongoing series about the Daredevil Girls. Sorry for the presumption I made. Very well done.

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016

Thanks so much. I truly value your comments. This book is a working document, and now is the time I can make changes, so please, please, if you find an idea or see I'm headed the wrong way, let me know. I like open discussions, and I trust your opinion.
Rhonda